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Virgil

  • Article / Essay » Literature, Spiritual Re: Don't Doubt all of History

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review on this Review Day. So I'm glad that you don't write essays in the way that you write poetry. It's much ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Saxophone of the Undead

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review on Review Day. So I thought that the Green Room had been cleared of your poetry, but apparently not/ With that, ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Music & Life

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review on this Review Day! Currently listening to music while reviewing this, so this definitely hits a nerve when I'm reading it. ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Girl in the Hall

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day. You could definitely call this poem effective at making the reader feel something. Or at least, this poem ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: hacker, sincerest

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review! So this definitely is an upgrade, I found. I'm glad that you ended up reworking this poem of yours since it's ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Traffic Jam

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on this Review Day! The first aspect of this poem that I noticed is the rhyme, which from what I can ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Alcohol Jigs

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review--you know the opening already. I need no introduction anymore, so let's jump right in. You say in your description that you ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Scarecrow of the Valley

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review on Review Day. I don't even need an introduction anymore really. I see that this poem is composed into two stanzas ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Sick Shows

    This is Nikayla dropping in for another review on this Review Day. So you have a lot of content in the Green Room. Which means I'm back for more. Jumping ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Garden of Night

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for another review on Review Day. You're fond of semicolons and ellipses here, I see. What I don't enjoy is the misuse of them, ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Borealis Paints

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on this Review Day. What I found to be disorienting about the poem is the inaccuracies that occur, or to be ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: we were a hugger and a trend.

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review this Review Day! This reminds me of one of your earlier poems, or at least, part of it does. The part ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: bed of roses

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review on Review Day! So I see that this is a poem in the format of ABCB with the standard three stanzas ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Culture Re: "Virtually Vibrating"

    This is Nikayla here dropping in for a review. So I see that you're persistent in making the sporadic capitalization and punctuation a style yet again in another poem. Due ...

    May 15, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Deleted 82

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    here is no metaphor here when i say when he told me to jump off a bridge, i did. and the gut-plunge of the bungee cord echoes when i think ...

    May 14, 2017


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