Virgil

The end and start of the chapter just doesn't feel strong like chapter one came off with its great start, but I will continue reading. I think it was pretty ...

I'm already hooked by the first sentence, mind you, I review while I read in chunks. The first paragraph is just, really well done, it makes me want to read ...

Alright, this is going to be quite short, because this is a short poem, so, let's begin. I have the problem, it's irritating me that you don't have a capital ...

I always love the first lines of your chapters, they hook you in so easily. I see we have a new character already by the first line. I love and ...

The first paragraph really hooked me in, I can tell it was meant to be a hook, but it was a well done good hook! It is kind of over-described, ...

I'm already hooked by the fact gargoyles are in the first sentence, nice job! I kind of have a love/hate relationship with your dialogue tags, I mostly dislike dialogue tags, ...

Alright, I'm here for a review on this since I couldn't find anything else to review! I love the main character's way of thinking, it's just so fun to follow ...

I love the simplicity but depth in this poem, the words are so simple, but they mean so much. I love the way it's written with the lines. And the ...

I like the unique names, it adds and makes you remember the story and characters. The descriptions are pretty well done, just enough so it doesn't feel like an overload. ...

A quiet, but echoing click of a door stirs me awake. Only when a rustling of fabric nearby with the sound of something clinking together do I open my eyes ...

Well, this is short to review, but I'll give it my best, "As the world burns", would be a grammar error, it would be, "As the world burns" "The sky ...

Wow. Well, this is different. First, I didn't know what Schizophrenia was, it was after I read it I looked it up. It sure is different, I like the way ...

Man, this is great, let me start. I like the way you compared a fruit loop to cheerios, as everyone else is, just like everyone else, it kind of says ...

Well, this is a very interesting poem. It all feels a little bit choppy in my opinion. I like the underlining theme, well, I love it and hate it. It's ...

Okay, so here this goes... I like the metaphors used, they make it much more realistic and makes me relate to firecrackers, because Cheez-its. Anyway, and you are of two ...