Young Writers Society

Alright, this is going to be quite short, because this is a short poem, so, let's begin.

I have the problem, it's irritating me that you don't have a capital letter at the start of each stanza, just pointing that out first.

I'll do a line by line review because it's so small.

little thought carries
dreams

Do you mean that something little can be somebody's life goal? Or maybe it could be something so little, but it inspires people, and is their dream, even if it is simple.

a forgotten gray
mystery

I have to point out, you use grey in the title, but gray in the poem, pick which one you want to use. I don't really know what this means, it's just so mysterious.

of hope glazed
with ambition

I like this line, when some people have hope for a dream, they become ambitious and want to do big things in life.

in a white
world

I don't get what you mean by "In a white world."

This poem is just, mysterious, and that's what makes it so good, it's mysterious.

hey, i really like this,is it your style to always write like this? its really cool, im more of a short story writer. I'm always so fascinated by how poets come up with their minds work. how do you come up with your poems? I've also always wondered do you think about the topic before writing it or does it just flow?
would love to hear back from you, thanks

Hello, there, RandomColumns! racket here to review this poem!
Well, firstly, I like how short this is, especially with how much meaning it carries at the same time.
I can't pretend to know what this poem is trying to tell us; it's too opaque and misty. This feels like, to me, a poem that will be read in English classes all over the world in a hundred years or so, with teachers trying to drag something extremely deep out of it and poor children begging for mercy. I like that, especially because I get to be the first to speculate.
I am trying to figure out what each of these stanzas stand for. Good job! You made a nice little mysterious poem, which fits the name.
The first and last stanzas are confusing me, in both good ways and bad. You always want these seemingly deep poems (I don't know if it is or not) to be a bit mysterious and to require some deep thought to figure out. I'll just ask questions. Does the first stanza

little though carries
dreams

a forgotten gray
mystery

of hope glazed
with ambition

in a white
world