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Re: Together forever
How broken were you because of he, just 'cause of he. Well, guess that's what happens with a lot of relationships now eh? A lot of broken promises lies scattered ...
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: Life Counts
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this a lot!. Are you a mathematician? a scientist? or a statistician maybe? You do write well. Indeed life counts. Despite the brokenness and chao
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: Um
This was indeed funny! LOL! Tired of the deep poems somehow though. Just like jack said. Tis gave me the best curve on my whole body. Great job there bud. ...
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: The Face
Another "one of those" novels eh? Well, let us see. Hmmm? The introduction was interesting. Something about losing the real face of the character. Interesting. About the use of the ...
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: Phantoms
I enjoyed this. It almost made me cry for no reason. I just don't know why. Phantoms. A lot of them are indeed here. For no good reason, they still ...
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 30: The Roof
Wow! Aside from it is very long, it is also very magical (well, I should've expected that, right?) This one sounds somewhat like Harry Potter's. You sound like one of ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Truth by design
Heya there Nankx! Great job on the exposition of the diety, holiness and righteousness of God. Grammatically speaking, I think you missed a spot: 2nd paragraph, 5th line they was ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Me.Prolouge.
Heya there Jack! Let's see. I am not the person who can give you the best review but I'm doing this with all my heart (Yeah, it's true. I love ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: My Truth
You are one great poet there (allow me to say this) my friend! Indeed a lot says they are okay when the truth is they are not and they do ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Life
Hey there Klara! you did a mind-boggling poem there, but I felt the deep emotion at the beginning lines. They are captivating. I like how you express your ideas but ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Quint.1.
This was intergalactically and humanly awesome! This work is a hooker. Humans, Intergalactic residents , and Hybrids, all of them are just so fantastically amazing. The description of the Hybrid, ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: The Warrior
Wow! The message was such a wonderful one. The warrior's characteristics and how you presented him is just awesome. Not really everyone sees a warrior in their different works you ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Crave
You did an awesomely great job on this. But before I go to the greatness of the technical things that you did, I would like to express my admiration to ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Live, Love, Learn
Live, love, learn. That's great. Your work has a lot to say, more than what you've written. Although it seems sort of hanging. I just feel like something is missing. ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: [deleted]
We see a lot of people who stay alone. We may not know why, but behind every person lies a story, right? Her red bag and purple skittles, they marked ...
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