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I'll agree with most the others. This definitely has drama in it, though I feel that it's more of a memoir writing piece than a poem, though in a few ...

I get the point, and it actually does seem interesting, but there are a few issues with the piece. First, I will second/third/fourth what everyone else has said. I will ...

This is a pretty good start to...something. As you said, it has no plot. If it did, it would be nice lol. It does sound much like the beginning of ...

Hehe. I have a hard time with lyric poetry because I desperately want to make it dramatic poetry--in which it is not--so my advice can be disregarded if you so ...

Hmm. I'm having a hard time with this........I don't really know what to think of it. HOnestly, I was kind of bored? There is some description, which is good, but ...

The US has spoke of going to Africa (especially to Darfur) quite a lot over the last year. The problem is that most countries in Africa are part of the ...

It's a sad story, it is. It sucks to lose a pet. Crit: I need more emotion, more of the senses as well. You are telling the story, you are ...

My main problem with this is the lack of rhythm/flow. It bounces back and forth and sideways and every which way possible until you have no idea how you are ...

I have two views to this: 1-It's too short. I hate haiku's for this reason. I need more, I want more to feel. Haiku's are typically imagery-specific, which helps a ...

I've read about half of it three times. I have heard its a great book and I really do like the style it's written in, but I'm having a hell ...

I've never been a huge Harry Potter fan, but all the hype about this book makes me want to know what happens in it (but not read it) so someone ...

He liked to eat the ones he loved; He liked to suffocate them. If only for a little while, he liked to try and date them. The repetitive ending of ...

Ah, libraries are for people who like having money. I say buy them all and go in debt!!!! :D I've tried very hard to get through a sisterhood book, as ...

It's cute, yes...yes it is. But, I could do with a little bit more info in the story. This little blurb really isn't anything, it's not long enough or informational ...

I actually liked this, which surprised me for such a short poem. The first part seems a little distant, or pointless...maybe a few more stanzas in the same style and ...