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Re: Infuriating
AutoPilot what the heck?!?!?! Why do you have to write something so..... AMAZING AND EPIC AND OH MY GOSH I SWEAR THIS IS SERIOUSY ME IRL OH MY GOSH OH ...
Jan 27, 2016 -
Re: The Little Mermaid
Hi!! I loved reading this fabulous work!! As a young girl, I watched "The Little Mermaid" and I admit I used to sing like her. ;) Yeah, those were the ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: Chase
Hi! I really liked reading this poem! It was very interesting. As you can see, I commented to your plea for writing assistance, jk. I hope you liked what verses ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: Cut Too Deep
Hi, I'm Emily. I'm 14. And I have cut too. I have dreamed of my razor slicing my arms, on my wrists, giving me a bloody mess. I want the ...
Jan 16, 2016 -
Re: shinga
Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I know you'll fit in here quite nicely! :) When I read your poem, I was surprised at how well you've rhymed. I have never ...
Jan 16, 2016 -
Re: It's Over, Now.
You write such interesting poems! I love the rhythm and rhyme! I have no complaints for you, the topics I agree with, and I see no flaws in your typing. ...
Jan 16, 2016 -
Re: Talk to me
"Talk to me" was a beautifully sculpted piece that exhibits brilliance, sorrow, loss, pain, dealing with it, incredulousness, and wonder. I know we've never even chatted before, and I don't ...
Aug 13, 2015 -
Re: My cat is a loser
Awwweeee!! So cute!!! It's funny how sometimes cat-owners and cat-lovers get annoyed by their kitties, but never ever would want them gone. Your Author's Note at the bottom was cute ...
Aug 11, 2015 -
Re: Word Wars
Hey, look who decided to write a poem! :) Em here to review 'Word Wars'. Clever title by the way- cute and I almost mistook it for World War by ...
Aug 4, 2015 -
Re: The head
Okay, first off... I loved this poem!! I read the other review on here, and I didn't find a really good one that would brighten your day. So I'm being ...
Aug 4, 2015 -
Re: Don't go
This is great writing!! I overall enjoyed reading this! I can sense the imagery used in here, and I notice the feelings displayed. It sounds like the narrator is crazy ...
Aug 4, 2015 -
Re: We Are Blessed
100% right. Humans do take many things for granted, can be selfish, and often wish for things that might never happen. But we are thankful for our blessings, even if ...
Aug 1, 2015 -
Re: beauty: the boy and the girl
This is so beautiful!!!! I love this!!! It's telling an amazing story and showing that love can mean so many things. You are an excellent writer and I hope you ...
Jul 31, 2015 -
Re: Monochrome
Wow, this is a good poem. Let me start with a better introduction... I noticed you just joined yesterday, so welcome to Yws!! I hope you'll have fun and enjoy ...
Jul 31, 2015 -
Re: Depression
I hope this isn't a personal poem... I hope you don't actually feel this alone and depressed. I've written many poems before about depression, and they all are real to ...
Jul 31, 2015
