Wow, this is a good poem. Let me start with a better introduction... I noticed you just joined yesterday, so welcome to Yws!! I hope you'll have fun and enjoy it here, since there's many things to love. If you ever have a question, come and ask me- I've been here about a week so I know a lot already about yws.
Hi there! CatLover211 here; you asked us to review so I'll give you a review. And a good, positive one since I have no negatives about this poem. It was moving in a way. Kind of haunting and mysterious, and also creepy because of the creature. You've written a great piece of work, and I encourage you to share with friends and family!
The 'eyes reflecting color' part of this poem was eerie yet intriguing. No one could see color in a monochrome world. I've seen monochrome before, in a room decorated completely like that, so you do a great job of showing and not telling. It's true in some sort.
You have a wonderful poem here, and I strongly encourage you to write more and post them. This is creative and unique, so I hope you'll love reading others that are similar to yours. Good job! You have skill and talent, so keep up! Have an awesome day! Happy writing!
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