Twinkle4ever

Hello! You wrote so well it made me want to read again! It was full of rhythm and emotion. Almost made me want to sing it out loud. Of course, ...

Hi. I loved this poem. It's filled with too many deep emotions. The picture gives me goose bumps. :) Anyway, you've written quite well. The flow is not disturbed once ...

Hey, I really liked this poem. What threw me off a little was the title. I don't see anything that connects it with the poem. Or that's probably me. It ...

It was a good poem. Emotions were reflecting with each line. I like the title you've chosen for your poem. It was very well thought and eye-catching. It suits it. ...

A very emotional poem reflecting the pain and hurt the person is feeling. I would suggest the use of capital letters when starting a new line otherwise it just throws ...

I like this story. Vivian is a daring girl, I see. She seems pretty unique to me already. I'll be looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters when ...

Hi. I read your poem and it was awsome. I was completely mesmerized in it. The flow of the poem wasn't disturbed and you kept with the rhythm. The message ...

First of all, I love the title. It's eye-catching. Second, ofcourse, your poem is quite good. The flow is not disturbed once and the message was easily conveyed to me. ...

It was short and sweet. What you wrote about love is true. No faults in that. Your poem had the rhythm. It was good. You chose the one word eye-catching ...

Hi. That was an awsome story! It was very sweet and romantic. I'm simply amazed that you actually wrote something like that in your science class. That was a little ...

Hello. You've chosen the perfect title for it. 'She Bears a Traitor's Sword' I like it. It immediately caught my attention. I like your presentation. You've displayed a very neat ...

Hey, I read your poem. I've got to say you've done a pretty good job. The title is very eye-catching. The poem made me think of vampires since they're immortal ...

Hello! I like the way you write. You can definitely go further into poetry. Not once were you drifted away from the title. You stuck with it. You have a ...

Hi! First of all, I loved the dramatic mood you've created in this poem. You've certainly put in a lot of emotion. There's something about it which attracted me and ...

I really liked this one. It's quite entertaining. Its sweet and short. I don't think there's anything wrong with what you've written. I like the line, Run, 'Lissa, Run! I ...