Twinkle4ever

I dare to review and it's not so hard you see. I enjoy reading this, do I have to make myself clear again? =P One thing I should add before ...

Hey again, *breathes out* finally I'm done reading all the previous chapters. And I can understand everything that's going on now. It turns out I was right about Jason and ...

Hi, I saw that pop up showing me the link. First of all, hats off to you for doing a good detailed piece. The descriptions were pretty good, a little ...

Now that the crazieness has ended here, maybe it will be a bit more quiet. This looks like a thought, you should put it in inverted commas or write in ...

I'm late again! =/ but not one purpose. I was on a leave. If I had to really honestly describe what I'm feeling right now after reading this, it would ...

Hello! You have a lovely piece here. It's got a good, smooth flow. And the fact that 'dark blue eyes' is recurring at the end of each para makes it ...

Hi, I just thought I'd read some short stories. I haven't read action in a while and this sort of made up for all the time I didn't read. It ...

Absolutely beautiful and dramatic. I loved it so much. You even managed to create the suspense in between the lines even though the whole time the two were just sitting ...

This is one of the best suspense slash horror stories I've ever read. It has everything in it. The starting, introduction of the problem, slowly with time how the problem ...

Oh my gosh!! I am literally jumping with excitement. This is going pretty well, and I never expected him to be a different race. Perhaps that's why his parents were ...

It's like you put the words right out of my mouth. I do too feel that way about a certain someone. He can't see past that one girl and although ...

Wow, this is quite a fun diary to read. Although I feel sorta guilty for peeking into the cat girl's personal stuff. Your narration is very clear and easy to ...

I so loved it, imagined it and it was something different than the way I always imagine. You have your way of sinking the words right into my brain because ...

Hey, sorry for the late review. I was out of town the previous day. So, back to the story, I like where this is going. You are keeping up with ...

ok, wow, first of all, I'll tell you what I thought of the narration. I think it was very good, I could relate to this person in a way that ...