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Hey, TwilightMuse here to review! First off I really enjoyed this poem, I think it's very well written and captures the feeling of going from elementary school to middle to ...

Hey there! TwilightMuse has come to review! I found this adorable and funny, a very well done poem all together. was an end, one had had I feel like this ...

Hey, TwilightMuse here to review! This sounds so apocalyptic, I love it! Really nice work here. I thought it was a trick of the light; This couldn't possibly be right. ...

Hey, TwilightMuse here for a review! Alright so I really adore this poem, it's well written and makes your point quite clear. You won't get through the night This line ...

Ok wow I don't really know how to respond to this. I feel pretty bad for your son to be honest if you really view him as some burden you ...

Hey this is TwilightMuse here to review your awesome work! I found this poem oddly satisfying to be honest. The descending syllables was probably a really hard thing to do ...

Hey there! TwilightMuse here for a review! I really adore this poem, I think it's very easy for high school students to relate to, especially juniors and seniors. Work at ...

I really like the way this poem flows and moves from one line to the other so easily. The message here is very strong. Teachers yelling, Tick tok telling, Kids ...

Well I really liked the first part but the last stanza sort of ruined it for me. I understand it's supposed to be satire but I feel it was better ...

I was NOT expecting that to go in the direction that it did and I applaud you. Many people do look up to the sky and think of such things, ...

Oh my goodness this was great! Short, sweet and to the point. This is also a pet peeve of mine, you posted it, you obviously like it right? But if ...

This poem has the bones to be something great, but it needs work. While reading it I found myself getting a bit confused. I can recognize what it's about and ...

This poem conveys your idea fantastically well without actually saying too much, which I appreciate. Death doesn't want me, Life doesn't want me I don't know exactly why but I ...

I absolutely loved this, I found myself wondering the entire time what happened. What happened to make you, or whoever this is about, not wear that bracelet anymore? Who gave ...