ToxicAnglerFish

Hello! I see this is the first poem you have posted on YWS, so welcome and I hope you enjoy it here! Anyway, let's get on with my review! Your ...

My god, this is such a touching, heartbreaking, and beautiful poem. It's so beautiful and heartbreaking as the narrator uses metaphors of burning their passion and their dreams away in ...

I absolutely love how beautiful and simple this poem is. I love how the city is described in such a simple and yet detailed matter with the right word choices ...

This is a very good positive message about keeping yourself together in these hard times! I really appreciate the metaphors such as "Being the devil won't bear any fruits", it's ...

I really adore this poem! It has a very nice rhyme scheme making it rememberable and nice to read. I also really love the metaphors of the knights and how ...

I really love the rhyming scheme in this poem! It's really pretty and it sounds very nice to read. I also love how happy yet sad you make the poem ...

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Hello! I have come to review your poem today! So let me get started: I really love how you portrayed the feelings of pain and the blissful ignorance of love ...

Hello! I am here to review your poem here today! I must say this was a interesting read to me as if seemed rather more abstract and simple then really ...

Hello! I wanted to leave a review on this poem of yours! I have mixed feelings about this poem so let's just get right into it. I feel like this ...

Hello! I came to review your poem today, this one really stuck out today since it's about Y.W.S its self! I really enjoyed this poem and how you described this ...

Hello! I came to review your poem! First of all, I'm sorry for the loss of your cat, I can really feel that since I lost two dogs myself a ...

Wow for this being the first poem on your account, its amazing! I really love how this poem tells a mini-story! I also really love how you describe this person ...

I really love how you describe the imagery of pain, hopeless, and sadness in this poem. It feels very emotional and extreme like how these emotions can feel when we ...

I love how incredibly detailed and deep this poem is! This poem honestly feels very empowered like you have truly overcome the event described in this poem. I love the ...