Hey!
I really like this poem, and like others have mentioned below, the simplicity of the poem is what makes it really beautiful. It is true that there is beauty in simplicity
I only have one thing to say, and it's just a personal suggestion. In the lines "But with everything in life that's nice/ Nice can't last for long" I don't prefer the repetition of the word "nice." Of course, that is up to you, and if you like it, keep it! I just decided it was worth mentioning, because to mw, the repetition disrupted the continuous flow of the poem since the two lines don't connect.
It was a really pretty and cute poem, and I enjoyed reading it! The reader really gets the idea that every good thing comes to an end. Thanks for sharing <3
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