k. so I'm keeping my promise so you should be mildly happy at that. got to say I'm impressed with this poem. 1 because I have zero ability to write poems that rhyme but also because you have done a really good job at building the atmosphere. While reading it it gives me a really confined, claustrophobic feeling. Like pressure that is slowly relieved until the end when it fully let out. Got to say vibing with the final line. Bolding the word blind was also an interesting visual choice as you can see as the poem has its turning point in tone.
See ya around Dori.
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