TonelessBard

Nice poem! It's really rare and new to see on my home page. Why does it remind me of the last book I read? Probably because It's incredibly fictional and ...

Beautiful piece of art. As far as I remember you always write something I enjoy reading. I'd change just one little line If I were you, and that's: "Our hearts ...

This sonnet should be divided in stanzas, otherwise I wouldn't notice it if there was no title. Anyway it's great and I like it. No one should expect it to ...

Hey Rage! The title itself already got me into reading this with some strange half-aggressive tone. I like the structure and rhyme, of course there are some lines I find ...

Hey there! Let me start right from the first stanza: "One day when you're dreaming, truth will find you. And the sun will rise An angel will arise to comfort ...

Hey LosCadaver! First of all, dreaming is one of my favorite things to write or discuss about, so I can immediately say that you wrote amazing lyrics. There's so much ...

Hey there! You know, I don't usually like religious songs, but this one seems good to me. This is the wonderful picture of having strong faith in something supernatural. "I ...

Hey there! Nice lyrics you got there, even tough I kinda lost myself reading them. I don't know about your taste, but I like when the lyrics have structure, it's ...

Hey there! It's nice to meet a lucid dreamer (if you are of course) on this site. However, I like your poem so much because it's all familiar to me. ...

Hey there! Your poem seems pretty nice. I love the structure and rhyme, but you should add more feeling and try to play with metaphors, it's pretty fun. It's interesting ...

Hello there! Nice poem, It kinda reminds me of Serj Tankian's new poetry book, you should check it out. It has so much power and you can feel the strong ...

Hey Lily! Your poem is great, but there's one thing that would make it more awesome... structure! I got lost a little bit while reading this, but anyway I think ...

I've never done a review of a poem, but I'll give it a try. It's strange how you mixed something dark with beautiful senses of smell. It sounds pretty romantic ...