Truth will find You

Hey there! Let me start right from the first stanza:

"One day when you're dreaming, truth will find you.

And the sun will rise

An angel will arise to comfort you"

That's what I'm thinking about all the time. Dreams are actually display of feelings and they're showing you how to live, but unfortunately many people don't know that. It sounds great, but you should be more careful about the punctuation, I don't mind about it much, but there are writers and poets that find it very important. I'd honestly put the full stop on the end of the third line, not the first. But that doesn't change almost anything for me, so don't worry about it.
The rest of the song just gave me goosebumps and I think I understand every line you wrote, or I just think I understand it, but It sounds very mysterious. I especially love the term "learn to see again". Things like this are really my cup of tea and I'd really like to read more from you, keep writing

~Bard

Hey! Panda here to review for you!
I do absolutely like these lyrics.
This might be weird, but I find the way your saying it to be pretty.
That's probably just me, but I think it sounds really pretty and honestly if you read it, it's down to the point.
No grammatical errors! That is amazing.
I'd really like to read more of your work.
Also like racket said, I also like the spacing of it! < 3

-Keep it up, the sun is shining in your future.-
(meaning you are BRILLIANT at Lyrical stuff)

-pandabear7

I really enjoyed these lyrics. I especially love how easy it is to read, you space out the lines so I can read better. My favorite line was:

"So take off your blinders

And learn to see again

Let yourself be rescued by the truth."

I suppose that was more than a line, but it was very good. And your summary is hysterical! " I am momentarily taking a break from making lyrics on death and destruction." I think that's what it said. Well, make that break longer! I want more! These lyrics are true though. When you're dreaming the truth can come and find you. I know the example I'm going to make is a little shallower than what you were trying to accomplish, but here we go. When you haven't studied for a test, the truth finds me when I'm in bed at night. I'm going to get a bad grade is what you're feeling throughout the whole of that horrid night. But I can see that you were going for a deeper meaning than what I just said. I understand this poem perfectly and it's perfectly executed. Bravo.
~Racket

I like this poem alot! It's one of those poems that just makes you feel a little more happy after you've read it. So---> to the review!

I think in the very first stanza, it might be better to use the word 'awake' instead of arise just because 'arise' is so similar to 'rise', but then again maybe you're trying to go for the double 'i' sound.

"One day when you're dreaming, truth will find you.
And the sun will rise
An angel will arise to comfort you"

I also think in the first stanza, the period after the first 'you' should be moved to after rise. Because with it after 'you' it makes "And the sun will rise" an incomplete thought just randomly in there, rather than the sun coming with the dream and the truth.

I think maybe there could also be a period after the word night in the 2nd stanza, but I'm unsure, if that's necessary. Besides that, I guess I don't see any mistakes or spelling problems.

I like how you tie the ending with the "rescued truth" with the beggining where it also talks about truth. It's a really nice piece, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

~alliyah~