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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cherrywood Child

    Hey Tiny here! Okay my favorite thing about this is how this girl enjoys all the seasons, not just one, like most of us. I can tell this girl needs ...

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 5:16 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Gone

    Hey Tiny here! I reallllyyy love this. I have made a couple changes to it to maybe improve it, its my opinion though so take it or leave it. I ...

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 1:53 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Berry yoghurt freedom

    Hey Tiny here! Okay I couldn't find any issues with this even though I agree that it sounds a bit weird with Marred stated twice but other than that I ...

    Fri Jan 03, 2014 12:32 am
  • Other » Other, Other Re: freedom call

    Hey Tiny here! I'm just here to point out your errors no big deal. It's something we all know it. I would suggest changing this to a comma But no ...

    Wed Jan 01, 2014 3:50 am
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: sweet summer

    Hey Tiny here! Okay I searched the deep depths of your poem and couldn't find any errors so I have rewarded you with a bolding of my favorite lines and ...

    Wed Jan 01, 2014 3:41 am
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Home, The Long Way Round

    Hey Tiny here! Okay I didn't seen any grammar issues so good job with that! I did find one spelling error though, in the first line realise should be realize. ...

    Tue Dec 24, 2013 8:19 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Most Beautiful Melody

    Hey Tiny here! I love the simplicity of it. Who new something so powerful could be less than 25 words? I only have one comment though, I thought the 3rd ...

    Tue Dec 24, 2013 8:15 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Weary Coat

    Hey Tiny here! Okay I have bolded my favorite parts of this poem for you. This is the first poem in a while I have been able to relate to ...

    Sun Dec 22, 2013 11:29 pm
  • Other » Other, Literature Re: The Box Exercise

    Hey Tiny here! Okay I have bolded my absolute favorite parts of this exercise. Picture a box. A glass box. The box can be small or large, it can be ...

    Sun Dec 22, 2013 11:25 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fitting in to

    Hey Tiny here! OK a can relate to this poem 421%. I kind of feel like everyone can actually. I have one concern about the poem though, its the title. ...

    Wed Dec 18, 2013 1:21 am
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: The Loudest Kind of Silence

    Hey Tiny here! I have bolded all y favorite parts of your poem for you to show your strengths rather than your weaknesses for once. Now, I am acutely aware ...

    Mon Dec 16, 2013 12:05 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Never Go Back

    Hey Tiny here, Well, that was fantastic. I am utterly horrible at palindrome and this really impressed me. A+ for you fortis. thank you for the beautiful palindrome that I ...

    Mon Dec 16, 2013 12:01 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Paradise

    Hey Tiny here! Okay so I have bolded my all time favorite parts of the poem for you since the other reviewers have already pointed out the mistakes. To feel ...

    Sun Dec 15, 2013 11:58 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: December Skies

    Hey Tiny here! Okay I have indentented my favorite parts of the poem for you, only because I loved it so much. December skies are stroked red with ---brushes of ...

    Sat Dec 14, 2013 1:20 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Ugly Prostitute and Her Son

    Hellooo its Tiny here! I've pointed out all my favorite parts because I think the others have agreed that this poem is utterly perfect. Yesterday was cracked ----Her heart is ...

    Tue Nov 19, 2013 10:29 pm


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