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TimmyJake

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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Warm as Ice: Prologue, Remembered.

    Timmy here to leave you a review! This was really good. I have always liked stories that were written like journals, giving a day to day breakdown of the characters ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Rebirth

    Timmy here to give you a review!! This was a beautiful poem! It sounds almost like a flower... an annual flower. Dying in the winter, and resurrecting in the spring. ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: When the darkness swoops over

    Timmy to leave you a review! This was so beautiful, so perfect. I want to critique something, truly, but what is there to critique? The flow was perfect, the story ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: You Can't Change Me

    Timmy here for a review! Soooo I hope this one is acceptable... you gave me a link to a different one but I saw this one and I was like, ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: What have I done?

    Timmy here to leave a review!! So this was really good! I enjoyed this story. It was very emotional, very sad. That his friend died like that, when he had ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Changed

    Timmyjake here to write you a review! (As promised) Now I don't know if this is the right one or not... I looked for one on December 22nd, just like ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: remind me that i am alive

    Timmy here for a review! So this was a great opening poem for you to start off in YWS!! Looks like this is your first day here, so Welcome! You ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Just Another Face

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review!! So this was really neat. It was written very well, and I love your imagery! I have a few teeny nitpicks here, so ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Why?

    Timmyjake here to write you a review! So this was really cool. Wonderfully written and spaced out. To tell you the truth, I don't think I have seen a poem ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Pointless.

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review! Hmmm.... So I Ixquicked it(an alternative to google lol) and it says that it is a Japanese form of poetry that is three ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: you

    Timmy here for a review, as promised! This was wonderful, smile! Truly wonderful! You have a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes, but those are easily missed because of your poem... ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Chatroom Encounters: Chapter 1

    Timmy here to leave you a short review! Ok, so this was wonderfully written. You have a flowing style, very entrancing, makes me was to keep turning the pages. Well, ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wake Me Up

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! I saw this and I was like, GOTCHA!!! mwahaha... This poem seems to have a hidden meaning, more than just the brightnes of ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stars of ink

    Timmy here for a quick review! So this was beautiful, very descriptive, but not overly. It had a wonderful flow to it as well. I loved the title! It just ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Cold Blades (title pending), Chapter One

    Timmyjake to give you a review!! Gosh, this is hard. Between chatting and writing reviews, this may take the longest time ever for me to write a proper review. Anyway, ...

    Jan 18, 2014


We shall not cease from exploration, and the end of all our exploring will be to arrive where we started and know the place for the first time.
— T.S. Eliot