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Re: Warm as Ice: Prologue, Remembered.
Timmy here to leave you a review! This was really good. I have always liked stories that were written like journals, giving a day to day breakdown of the characters ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Rebirth
Timmy here to give you a review!! This was a beautiful poem! It sounds almost like a flower... an annual flower. Dying in the winter, and resurrecting in the spring. ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: When the darkness swoops over
Timmy to leave you a review! This was so beautiful, so perfect. I want to critique something, truly, but what is there to critique? The flow was perfect, the story ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: You Can't Change Me
Timmy here for a review! Soooo I hope this one is acceptable... you gave me a link to a different one but I saw this one and I was like, ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: What have I done?
Timmy here to leave a review!! So this was really good! I enjoyed this story. It was very emotional, very sad. That his friend died like that, when he had ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: Changed
Timmyjake here to write you a review! (As promised) Now I don't know if this is the right one or not... I looked for one on December 22nd, just like ...
Jan 23, 2014 -
Re: remind me that i am alive
Timmy here for a review! So this was a great opening poem for you to start off in YWS!! Looks like this is your first day here, so Welcome! You ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Just Another Face
Timmyjake here to leave you a review!! So this was really neat. It was written very well, and I love your imagery! I have a few teeny nitpicks here, so ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Why?
Timmyjake here to write you a review! So this was really cool. Wonderfully written and spaced out. To tell you the truth, I don't think I have seen a poem ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: Pointless.
Timmyjake here to leave you a review! Hmmm.... So I Ixquicked it(an alternative to google lol) and it says that it is a Japanese form of poetry that is three ...
Jan 22, 2014 -
Re: you
Timmy here for a review, as promised! This was wonderful, smile! Truly wonderful! You have a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes, but those are easily missed because of your poem... ...
Jan 21, 2014 -
Re: Chatroom Encounters: Chapter 1
Timmy here to leave you a short review! Ok, so this was wonderfully written. You have a flowing style, very entrancing, makes me was to keep turning the pages. Well, ...
Jan 20, 2014 -
Re: Wake Me Up
Timmyjake here to give you a review! I saw this and I was like, GOTCHA!!! mwahaha... This poem seems to have a hidden meaning, more than just the brightnes of ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Stars of ink
Timmy here for a quick review! So this was beautiful, very descriptive, but not overly. It had a wonderful flow to it as well. I loved the title! It just ...
Jan 19, 2014 -
Re: Cold Blades (title pending), Chapter One
Timmyjake to give you a review!! Gosh, this is hard. Between chatting and writing reviews, this may take the longest time ever for me to write a proper review. Anyway, ...
Jan 18, 2014
