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TimmyJake

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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Warm as Ice: Prologue, Remembered.

    Timmy here to leave you a review! This was really good. I have always liked stories that were written like journals, giving a day to day breakdown of the characters ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Rebirth

    Timmy here to give you a review!! This was a beautiful poem! It sounds almost like a flower... an annual flower. Dying in the winter, and resurrecting in the spring. ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: When the darkness swoops over

    Timmy to leave you a review! This was so beautiful, so perfect. I want to critique something, truly, but what is there to critique? The flow was perfect, the story ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: You Can't Change Me

    Timmy here for a review! Soooo I hope this one is acceptable... you gave me a link to a different one but I saw this one and I was like, ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: What have I done?

    Timmy here to leave a review!! So this was really good! I enjoyed this story. It was very emotional, very sad. That his friend died like that, when he had ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Changed

    Timmyjake here to write you a review! (As promised) Now I don't know if this is the right one or not... I looked for one on December 22nd, just like ...

    Jan 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: remind me that i am alive

    Timmy here for a review! So this was a great opening poem for you to start off in YWS!! Looks like this is your first day here, so Welcome! You ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Just Another Face

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review!! So this was really neat. It was written very well, and I love your imagery! I have a few teeny nitpicks here, so ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Why?

    Timmyjake here to write you a review! So this was really cool. Wonderfully written and spaced out. To tell you the truth, I don't think I have seen a poem ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Pointless.

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review! Hmmm.... So I Ixquicked it(an alternative to google lol) and it says that it is a Japanese form of poetry that is three ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: you

    Timmy here for a review, as promised! This was wonderful, smile! Truly wonderful! You have a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes, but those are easily missed because of your poem... ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Chatroom Encounters: Chapter 1

    Timmy here to leave you a short review! Ok, so this was wonderfully written. You have a flowing style, very entrancing, makes me was to keep turning the pages. Well, ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wake Me Up

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! I saw this and I was like, GOTCHA!!! mwahaha... This poem seems to have a hidden meaning, more than just the brightnes of ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stars of ink

    Timmy here for a quick review! So this was beautiful, very descriptive, but not overly. It had a wonderful flow to it as well. I loved the title! It just ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Cold Blades (title pending), Chapter One

    Timmyjake to give you a review!! Gosh, this is hard. Between chatting and writing reviews, this may take the longest time ever for me to write a proper review. Anyway, ...

    Jan 18, 2014


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