TimmyJake

Timmy here for a quick review! I wrote this before, but somehow it was deleted.... *looks around suspiciously* I wonder who did it? Nitpicks My eyes tanned of the isolating ...

Timmy here for a quick review! How I review is I go through and review as I read, so nitpicks shall be first! :) Nitpicks I never knew how empty ...

Timmy here for a quick review!! This is like a narrative poem to me, and it flows like one. I like the rhyming pattern you have too! Nitpicks A lamppost ...

Timmy here for a quick review!! So first I will just mention that you turned the most common idea ever written and changed it into your own amazing idea... Knives ...

Timmy here for a quick review! You will have to forgive me if this is short and uncomplimentary... Its late here and I am so tired!! Nitpicks The constant flash ...

Timmy here for another review! My apologies if I am attacking your works too often. It seems as though the dark side is not only overwhelming my actions, but my ...

Timmy here for a quick review! Ok, so I am a littttllle bit late, but better late then never, right? :) Nitpicks Its caffeine is my addiction cause. ---Maybe cut ...

Timmy here for another *coughs* amazing review!! I don't know if you realize this, but I have turned to the dark side... So there will be a lot of nitpicking ...

Timmy here for a review! So this was an amazing poem, full of vivid imagery and a wonderful story inside!! Nitpicks If the world will die, nothing will remain. ---Everything ...

Timmy here for a review, as requested! You have been awarded a great honor! With this review, I earn my fifth star... So you are receiving my 250th review! :D ...

Timmy here for a quick review!! So this was a wonderful poem. Vivid imagery + wonderful story = awesome! Nitpicks Will you be mine? ---This line seems out of place ...

Timmy here for a review!! I am so happy! You wrote something! Yay!! I will just say that you wrote it because I complained. :D Nitpicks I close my eyes, ...

Timmy here for a quick review! Wow, what a lot you state in one short poem... I always like poems with more than love and rejection in them; a poem ...

Timmy here for a quick review!! So you have a really neat idea here!! :D Nitpicks I think my biggest nitpick here is a lack of imagery... You need to ...

Timmy here for a review!! This might be really quick, since poetry isn't really my strongpoint, but I will try my hardest! :D Ok, so i thought these were amazing... ...