Tikaya

End of an era. I don't know what to do now that I've reached the final poem lol I already love the title tho! I like how it already says ...

Second to last poem. Let's see how Jasmine is pining =D My prediction is that this is her answer while she waits for Lavender to get off the plane! Aww ...

I already know the answer from the next poem's title but I also think Lavender's not being all that subtle XD Ryuku is a location? So Lavender's on the plane ...

Okay the title reminded me of a manga that I quite liked which is why I came here to take a look at your poem =D I like the idea ...

Say can you get an ear worm from text? Because sometimes when I least expect it, my brain goes: a calming notion, perpetual in motion XD In any case, this ...

Hmmm I wonder if we ever got a name for the president. It’s been so long since I read the last chapters of Eternal Beauty. Oh I do like how ...

That's an excellent end to the first stanza: "With it all -- I'm coming home, honey bun." Really good! Second stanza also has a punchy ending. I am loving this ...

Found the title so interesting, decided to check out the poem :3 I like the font you chose for it. Also, second line is really sad :( And why does ...

I have a question, dove. Why didn't you make this a post in the writer's corner? Do you really want feedback and comments on what your characters are like? Because ...

Hah, I knew the answer :3 I also like that Jasmine challenges the riddle's wording and gives counter-examples and explanations. (I do like how that stanza flows too!) Paradoxes create ...

Ok ok you got me to look up something but I still don't get it xd What does "simul falsity" mean? Considering the rest of the stanza, i suppose it's ...

...Are you sure those first 3 lines are poetry? XD I am the first to admit that I don't get the artform but this feels style-breaking... The second paragraph/proper stanza ...

All of the time... (Yes yes I understand the reference) I even know the answer. Tho I feel like starting with THIS right in your second stanza isn't exactly a ...

Hmmm I don't actually see the connection between riddle and solution. Might be related to how old the two protagonists are? (But then, I rather thought they were in their ...

Hi Alex! For the first time I got to see the "you haven't reviewed anything today so why not try this" message and so I came here xd I already ...