Tikaya

Another work that is out of order in the Green Room. Why is the sorting so awful qq First of all, I like how you spread out the word “anomaly” ...

Okay since I read these chapters back to back now, I have another thought: Not only was the ending to last chapter a bit unsatisfying… you also don’t really resolve ...

I’m doing a bit of a catchup on all the stories I missed while I was ill and could only concentrate on short poems for weeks on end~ Last time ...

Oh what an evocative poem. I find the word choices very poignant and visceral… even if I am not entirely sure about the true meaning. I just found myself becoming ...

Since I am about to become a mom, I guess it is only fair that I read a story about the first birthday of a child (at least I assume ...

Morning Scarlett :) Told you I would show up to check this out, soon-ish ^^ Hmm feels like the first paragraph has a tad too many short sentences :3 But ...

End of an era. I don't know what to do now that I've reached the final poem lol I already love the title tho! I like how it already says ...

Second to last poem. Let's see how Jasmine is pining =D My prediction is that this is her answer while she waits for Lavender to get off the plane! Aww ...

I already know the answer from the next poem's title but I also think Lavender's not being all that subtle XD Ryuku is a location? So Lavender's on the plane ...

Okay the title reminded me of a manga that I quite liked which is why I came here to take a look at your poem =D I like the idea ...

Say can you get an ear worm from text? Because sometimes when I least expect it, my brain goes: a calming notion, perpetual in motion XD In any case, this ...

Hmmm I wonder if we ever got a name for the president. It’s been so long since I read the last chapters of Eternal Beauty. Oh I do like how ...

That's an excellent end to the first stanza: "With it all -- I'm coming home, honey bun." Really good! Second stanza also has a punchy ending. I am loving this ...

Found the title so interesting, decided to check out the poem :3 I like the font you chose for it. Also, second line is really sad :( And why does ...

I have a question, dove. Why didn't you make this a post in the writer's corner? Do you really want feedback and comments on what your characters are like? Because ...