TiffanyToy

Hey! So, in the beginning and middle parts I became a little sad. But not, like, super sad. I know this was supposed to be sad and be serious, but ...

Hey Chrissy! So, I know we both had to do a two voice poem. Can you review mine? Also, I don't really see any problems in this. I just think ...

Hey! So, I only have minor things review type things. So, please put spaces after periods. I mean, I know it's your natural nature but it just looks easier to ...

Hey, steward! Here for a review. So, I really like this. The whole way the main character saw how much everyone would miss her. That was a new perspective but ...

Hi!! I have one question. How does the second poem relate to the first? Like, what are the relations between the two people? I mean, I KNOW there is one, ...

Hey CHRISSY!! Great job in getting into the Literary Spotlight!! I also agree with Rose and Click!! So, I just think you shouldn't post anything unless you have checked over ...

Hey!! I love the message in this and I am really astounded that a 13 year old could write something this terrific. I know I couldn't be able to write ...

Hi!! This isn't exactly a review, but, there isn't much to review...But!! ALAS, thats good! Also, its in email form so it really doesn't matter what grammar or spelling corrections ...

Wow! Hello! So, first off, it seems you are very experienced at the subject of poetry! And others as so I see......===>. Also, I can find no errors except much ...

Hello! So, I really like this poem. @JasmineSimmons and to the rest of everyone whom cares. I feel like this everyday. Me being the bolded words. Jasmine, thats. Me. Every. ...

Hello Weymouth and happy review day!! I really like this. It says a lot. But, some of the rhymes seem a little forced..... But, I seriously loved the way you ...

Hi, AKinG!! So, first off, you should never rip up anything. Well, so says my creative writing teacher..:/ But, anyway. don't think so low about this. Work up some more ...

Hi, pen princess, and happy review day to you!! I love your username....and this poem!! So, I really like this! I love the words you used and phrases that you ...

Hey there, Tay01, and Happy Review Day!! So, I really like this. The only minor problem I have with it is the ending. I still like it, nonetheless, but, I ...

Hey!! So I see nothing Much to review. This Is so very simple yet elegant. great job. I love the fact That you repeated certain phrases to make a point. ...