Tiaradyson

THIS IS FREAKING GOOD, I am hooked. I am not a fan of historical books. But i'm a fan of yours. The dialogue was genius and funny and you had ...

I like your script; there was something I learned about scripting though from my Creative Writing teacher. When the character is moving or thinking you use these ----> ( ) ...

Man you don't get it lol It's so damn confusing with the ticking and tocking that I have to keep reading to understand. And I feel like this is like ...

I thought it was freaking epic, I had one trouble; I could have read it wrong. "until she found herself on a cliff overlooking the entire of her village." Was ...

Freaking brilliant. Your metaphors were good, but easy to follow to tell us what this poem is about. It's sweet and what some gays feels about not being themselves in ...

That was beautiful! I can imagine a women dropping to her knees while the rain is pouring. It's very deep because of the last sentence: "The sound they make reminds ...

This was great, I had the perfect imagery. Tho you did not, give much detailing to work with. I felt as tho you did great. The characteristics of a women ...

This was great, it needs an update. I don't think a nine year old boy would have that much of a vocab, that I couldn't understand lol I like how ...

This reminds me a lot like me and my mothers past life. And reading this I did get teary. I did feel like I needed to be free and when ...

Awe! my hubby needs to see this! I feel the same way about him. I cant live without him. I like how you turned a love so lusting for their ...

Great! loved and I don't understand how the character could be so calm about know that big old man asking randomly for his child and the character is all like ...

OMG YOU HAD ME SWEATING! like I love horror movies, books anything scary and boii you had me! it was amazing. Such great imagery I couldn't wrap my finger around ...

AWE! that's how I feel about my HuBBY! he's amazing and kind and he makes my rainy days feel sunny! Your writing resembled a lot to me, obviously and every ...

I feel like this is towards me cause I feel this emotion, when I drink coffee like no matter how many cups I drink. It's a struggle to keep my ...

OH MAN! I'm in love with it. Song, poetry all sounds the same. This was beautiful and drizzled all over with talent! Your word choice is remarkable, words I haven't ...