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Legacy here for a review. I had a hard time reading this poem because of the random capitalization and characters. It is a stylistic choice, but just keep in mind ...

Legacy here for a review. You have "a souls scar" and it should be a soul's scar. (sorry just a nitpick I know). You also use Oxford's comma sometimes and ...

Legacy here for a review. I will skip over the nitpicks since wriskypump has already pointed them out. Before I get to content, let me just point out that for ...

Legacy here for a review. The content that you wrote about is written about a lot, but you tackled that by making it written in such a way that no ...

Legacy here for a review. I also had a hard time understanding what your wrote. This may mean that you should reword it. I wish I could review for content. ...

Legacy here for a review. I had a hard time reading this poem because of your random capitalization and characters. It is a stylistic choice but keep in mind, it ...

Legacy here for a review. It seems like you have written a song here. I would personally love to hear it read (or sung). You have some random capitalization and ...

Legacy here for a review. A comment before I start the review. You have this in the lyrics category, but in most cases, lyrics have a constant rhyme pattern and ...

Legacy here for a review. I haven't ever read a poem that romanticised being drunk in such a way. (I honestly love it). You have the imagery there, I could ...

Legacy here for a review. I haven't read a poem with this kind of content. (I honestly wish there was more written like this). I could totally hear this as ...

Legacy here for a review. This tells a tale that most don't really write about (which is good). It was interesting how you wrote the story. I could easily tell ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the content. I could easily read the story behind it. And I can relate to that a lot actually. You seem to have ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the content. I haven't really read anything like this. The timestamps really help lead through the passage of time. I don't understand how ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the content of this poem; I don't think I have ever seen someone write about a crush rivalry in such a way. You ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the content. No one really writes about their significant other sleeping, although it is such a nice experience. Now on to some very ...