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Re: Dear Victoria, You Kill Me
Legacy here for a review. I love the lines "please kill me with your words again." and "no one can touch you without hurting themselves." They have so much meaning. ...
Feb 21, 2018 -
Re: Blood
Legacy here for a review. I love this poem. I know the struggle of wanting to write so many words to seemingly having no reason. This is so strongly worded ...
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: In My Father's Eyes
Legacy here for a review. I love the message of this poem very much. I am a sufferer of migraines so I kinda know the pain that they feel (at ...
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: I'm tired
Legacy here for a review. I know truly how it feels to be in a situation like this and you portray it beautifully. A suggestion that I would make is ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: Knny (No E's)
Legacy here for a review. I love how this short story shows the importance of one simple vowel E, since every e was missing from this short. I couldn't read ...
Feb 13, 2018 -
Re: The Truest Knight of Green
Legacy here for a review. FIRST OF ALL WOOW I DID NOT KNOW THIS WAS ABOUT SHREK UNTIL THE LAST FRICKEN LINE. (okay now I'm done with the yelling). I ...
Feb 13, 2018 -
Re: [Review Contest] The One Before
Legacy here for a review. I dislike the fact that in the beginning you describe blue sky, and then the line immediately after, also describe the blue surf. It is ...
Feb 9, 2018 -
Re: Goodbye
Legacy here for a review. I love the concept of this poem and how positive and realistic it is at the same time. It is very beautiful. You use figurative ...
Feb 9, 2018 -
Re: Early fall
Legacy here for a review. "there wings shining bright..." should be "Their wings shining bright." because of the fact there means a place and their means belonging to someone. I ...
Feb 9, 2018 -
Re: Deep Thinking
Legacy here for a review. First of all, this is really f***ing deep. (Sorry I never cuss on this site in reviews but this one deserves it.) Okay now that ...
Feb 8, 2018 -
Re: Love haiku
Legacy here for a review. I love the concept of comparing love to a dream in such a short way. The last line is such a punch in the gut ...
Feb 8, 2018 -
Re: Again
Legacy here for a review. I relate so much to this poem. It reminds me of how I felt during my abusive relationship and it hit hard. I don't know ...
Feb 7, 2018 -
Re: lost pencil
Legacy here for a review. I love the concept of a broken and lost pencil. I would recommend a stanza break after "a big old brown tree" just because after ...
Feb 6, 2018 -
Re: blossom
Legacy here for a review :) I love this story of a flower wanting to blossom and join where the rest of the flowers have gone. I don't think you ...
Feb 6, 2018 -
Re: I am sorry
Legacy here for a review. I love the emotion that you convey in this poem. But I do agree with the other reviewer that the last line of this should ...
Jan 25, 2018
