Hello, E.E here for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, lets get started.
To start off this review, the first thing I noticed is that well, nothing! But please, like I have said many times before, is that tell us readers if you are going to have grammar or not. That would help us greatly when reading!
Otherwise, I didn't notice anything wrong and it flowed very well.
Overall, I liked the poem and keep up the good work! So, happy Valentines Day ! I really need to go now, Grim has souls to reap and he needs more cocoa. He has a problem, seriously. Annnd I think he brought a dinosaur to life. Great. Anyways, Cheerio and fruit loops to you!
Points: 0
Reviews: 206
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