ThePretentiousEnema

Hey man! I flipped through your work and stumbled upon this. You have a great writing voice, keep it up man! I especially liked the playful, almost easy-going tone of ...

This is unarguable a very personal piece, which I can identify with quite deeply. The subtle details of how boring and artificial the life of the average middle class citizen ...

The entire poem is like a build-up, and then you flash the punchline at the end, giving the reader a quick, but enjoyable, moment of clarity. I like the structure, ...

While the poem was fairly structured, and the contents were all right :) I find the theme very interesting. That some people expect others to realize their pain; their constant ...

This poem actually carries some heavy truth about people in general, or rather; people who have undergone heartache, which most have, I'd say. What I like about this poem is ...

I'd say that this is the ingredients that could result in a quite delicious set of pancakes. Like previously stated, get some meat on the bones, make the rhyming a ...

Beautiful. This captures exactly the tense atmosphere between two supposed lovers, people who may have been involved before, or two friends who are both too aware of each others' intentions, ...

It's a nice little testament to the elements of which are commonly regarded as the traits of night. :) It's relate-able through smooth imagery. The structure of the text seems ...

It's a nice concept, and I like the shortness of it, yet I want more. It touches on a theme that I personally find very intriguing, and it's that the ...

Very interesting theme... To me, this kind of describes the cycle of depression. You're sinking deeper, and you manage to save yourself from drowning, and you rejoice for a moment ...

Well, it's a cute poem. Remaining true to the issue of unrequited love. Or complicated love. This is just me though, but I tend to find this structure a bit ...

Sorry, but this was just a pointless rant about a pointless subject. Write to heal your soul, to cleanse your mind, not for the petty reason of becoming famous. Like ...

I like the way this speaks about human nature; how we all love tragedy, and the darker sides of us are usually the ones who reach the paper, not always; ...

This was really interesting, mate. Like said below already, the shifting of PoV in the second stanza really adds more meat to this piece. I like poems who give room ...