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Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter Two
I'm back for more! Hopefully, I'll get done with all your chapters before review day ends. Nitpicks! The jerking made him bleed more. Wait.... you said the healer was stitching ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Breaker of Chains - Chapter One
Scar! Anne here with reviews for you. Happy Review Day! Let's go with... nitpicks first. The throne room was silent as Kaisar slipped into through a hidden door. 'In', not ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Stone Cold Hands - Chapter 2
Hey, love! Queen here with a Review Day review for you. I haven't read the previous chapters, so bear with me here if I mention or critique something you've already ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 5.0
And... as soon as I'm done with this one, I'm finally all caught up. Until you enter this week's chapter, WHICH YOU SHOULD DO SOON. Question: all your other chapter ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 4.2
I'm ba-ack! Aren't you glad to see me! I'm winning my review-battle. (Christ, I hope you read my reviews back to back or you'll be so confused.) Nose to the ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 4.1
Here for more. Note: I've no idea why I've been spoilering, but I don't think I can fix that now. Those were meant to be quotes. *oops* Anyway, let's do ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 3.2
Aaannnnd... onto the next chapter, since I'm review-battling! Down to the grindstone we go. Nitpicks first, as always. He cast Simon a quick glance as he erased the protective engarvments ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 3.1
Hallo, Pompsicles! More revewing, yay! So, today's review day, so let's get down to business, shall we? You know the drill, nitpicks first. It had closed at dusk, for outsiders, ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 2.2
Pomp! It's review time! :P You know the drill, nitpicks first. Let it be clarified here and now: a hungry wabbit is anything but comical-looking. I really and truly hope ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 2.1
Pompsicles! I adore this chapter. (And yay, you either took my suggestion to write Arlene's POV or were planning on it anyway! Both make me happy.) Nice time jump and ...
Aug 12, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 1.3
And... I'm here, for 1.3! (I think I might be getting into reviewing again. Who knows?) As I said in my review for your previous chapter, I think you could ...
Aug 6, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 1.2
And I'm back for part two! Also, you should note that I was freakishly eager to read this. :P Aww, not as much description in this chapter. But that's okay, ...
Aug 3, 2015 -
Re: Tryal's Curse 1.1
Hey, Pomp! Finally, I've gotten around to reviewing this. *I'll get to chapter two, I promise* So, let's start on what I believe will be a very, very long review! ...
Jul 29, 2015 -
Re: A Scale of Power- Chapter Five
Hallo, love. Anne here to write a Review Day review for you. Haven't read the previous chapters, but I'll do my best. Nitpicking first, aye? You've got a lot of ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 31: The Return
Hallo, love! Aurora here with a beautiful Review Day review for you. I think I've read a couple chapters in the past, so if I critique anything you already addressed, ...
Nov 30, 2014
