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Re: Lifesong: A short story
Hello! This is a touching and well-written piece of fiction. It tells the story of a father, Jamie, and his son, Philip, attending a concert on the planet Mrylst to ...
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Re: Overgrown
Hello! This story paints a post-apocalyptic world in a vivid and descriptive manner. The author successfully creates a sense of desolation and overgrowth with the use of language, highlighting the ...
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Re: In my head
Hello! This is a powerful and raw expression of someone's struggle with mental health and the negative feedback they've received from others. It's important to acknowledge that mental health issues ...
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Re: Our little full time theatre
Hello! This is a thought-provoking piece that explores the concept of performance and authenticity. The speaker suggests that we are constantly performing, and that the true essence of our selves ...
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Hello! This a short but sweet poem that explores the emotions and questions that arise when someone falls in love. The poem is written in a simple and straightforward style ...
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Re: Funeral In Unglaciated Country
Hello! This is a complex and deeply introspective piece that deals with themes of loss, grief, and reflection. The language is dense and layered, using a range of metaphors and ...
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Re: A Kid
Hello! This is a raw and emotional expression of the struggles and frustrations of youth. The repetition of "I'm just a kid" emphasizes the feeling of being overlooked and not ...
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Re: Pause
Hello! This is a raw and introspective poem that captures the feeling of disillusionment and disappointment with oneself. The use of the metaphor of being a spectator of one's own ...
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Re: The Restless Statue
This is a captivating and thought-provoking poem that explores themes of time, aging, and mortality. The author uses vivid and evocative imagery to create a mood of melancholy and reflection. ...
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Re: Early Morning Coffee
This can be read from the perspective of wanted to live, but seeing the opportunity for suicide. Some motivation to keep going, like how they "escaped with a brimming cup". ...
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Re: Adventures of an AL beta chapter 7.
This chapter gives more information on the lore, and atmosphere of the world while still focusing on the aspects of Cooper's life. Although this chapter is on it's own, different ...
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Re: My Best Friend is Gay.
Extremely relatable for someone who knows to many gay people to count. I know what they've been through, discrimination, unacceptance, and not proud of who they are. I have had ...
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Re: Adventures of an AL. Beta chapters 1-6
The opening is great. Cooper doesn't know who he is, or what he's done, and that provides a bit of mystery to the story. The creative concepts of fighting arenas, ...
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Re: 100 hundred ways to die during the apocalypse
The narrator changing focus from Jones to Bebe is a nice way to show how each character views the calapsing world. The characters, depsite only two being introduced have interesting ...
Feb 19, 2023
