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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Lifesong: A short story

    Hello! This is a touching and well-written piece of fiction. It tells the story of a father, Jamie, and his son, Philip, attending a concert on the planet Mrylst to ...

    Apr 5, 2023
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Overgrown

    Hello! This story paints a post-apocalyptic world in a vivid and descriptive manner. The author successfully creates a sense of desolation and overgrowth with the use of language, highlighting the ...

    Apr 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Health, General Re: In my head

    Hello! This is a powerful and raw expression of someone's struggle with mental health and the negative feedback they've received from others. It's important to acknowledge that mental health issues ...

    Apr 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Our little full time theatre

    Hello! This is a thought-provoking piece that explores the concept of performance and authenticity. The speaker suggests that we are constantly performing, and that the true essence of our selves ...

    Apr 4, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: -

    Hello! This a short but sweet poem that explores the emotions and questions that arise when someone falls in love. The poem is written in a simple and straightforward style ...

    Apr 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Funeral In Unglaciated Country

    Hello! This is a complex and deeply introspective piece that deals with themes of loss, grief, and reflection. The language is dense and layered, using a range of metaphors and ...

    Apr 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: A Kid

    Hello! This is a raw and emotional expression of the struggles and frustrations of youth. The repetition of "I'm just a kid" emphasizes the feeling of being overlooked and not ...

    Apr 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, Dramatic Re: Pause

    Hello! This is a raw and introspective poem that captures the feeling of disillusionment and disappointment with oneself. The use of the metaphor of being a spectator of one's own ...

    Apr 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Restless Statue

    This is a captivating and thought-provoking poem that explores themes of time, aging, and mortality. The author uses vivid and evocative imagery to create a mood of melancholy and reflection. ...

    Apr 2, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Early Morning Coffee

    This can be read from the perspective of wanted to live, but seeing the opportunity for suicide. Some motivation to keep going, like how they "escaped with a brimming cup". ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Adventures of an AL beta chapter 7.

    This chapter gives more information on the lore, and atmosphere of the world while still focusing on the aspects of Cooper's life. Although this chapter is on it's own, different ...

    Feb 23, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Extremely relatable for someone who knows to many gay people to count. I know what they've been through, discrimination, unacceptance, and not proud of who they are. I have had ...

    Feb 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Adventures of an AL. Beta chapters 1-6

    The opening is great. Cooper doesn't know who he is, or what he's done, and that provides a bit of mystery to the story. The creative concepts of fighting arenas, ...

    Feb 19, 2023
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: 100 hundred ways to die during the apocalypse

    The narrator changing focus from Jones to Bebe is a nice way to show how each character views the calapsing world. The characters, depsite only two being introduced have interesting ...

    Feb 19, 2023


Y'know, sometimes a family is a mutant superhuman clown with cartoony powers, a hyperactive shapeshifter created in a lab, the ghost of an artificially created being who only exists for exposition, a cat who is an eldritch god for some reason, and an emo guy who doesn't canonically exist
— GengarIsBestBoy