Hello!
I loved this.
You chose such a relatable narrator, and really emphasise the "I'm just a kid" because that's what everyone tells you, "You are just a kid so you can't know much". And you describe you they are constantly trying to be enough but it makes you feel worse, makes you feel like you want to die, but still people tell that you are just a child and there is no way that you are feeling that bad. Overall, this really explains how being young feels and how everyone overlooks at your problems.
Points: 20
Reviews: 10
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