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  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: A Ticking Bomb

    Hello! This poem is a perfect representation of the darker side of the Earth currently. It's just a ticking bomb, that at any moment could ruin all around it. The ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: on bereavement

    Hello! This poem is short, but even with few words, it says so much. The way of putting trees losing their leaves by saying, "trees learn death early every autumn" ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: i_cantgotosleep

    Hello! This poem focuses on a night that many can relate to, to where one cannot fall asleep but the reason why is unclear. Which is usually the case for ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The air is yellow

    Hello! This poem is a wonderful example of detailing to let a reader visualize what is happening. The usage of describing sights and smells really makes the reader feel as ...

    Jun 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: i place my candle upside down to rest my chin

    Hello! The provided piece evokes a vivid image of a person's contemplative experience during a rainy day. The use of descriptive language creates a strong sensory experience for the reader, ...

    May 30, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: On a Tightrope

    Hello! This is a poignant and introspective piece that explores the internal struggle of an individual caught between the desire to speak their mind and the fear of the consequences ...

    May 25, 2023
  • Short Story » Horror, Narrative Re: The Vulture

    Hello! The passage you've shared is a vivid and intense portrayal of a complicated relationship. The writing captures the emotional turmoil and conflicting feelings experienced by the narrator. The us

    May 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: i am the only one

    Hello! This poem conveys a strong sense of loneliness and a fear of losing control. It portrays a poignant moment where the narrator feels isolated and disconnected from the people ...

    May 14, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: we are still children in the end

    Hello! This poetic passage captures the fragmented beauty of a relationship and the lingering presence of someone within the narrator. The use of imagery and metaphors creates an evocative atmosphere ...

    May 1, 2023
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: We are all carved from this same plot of land & wedge of sky, this is our inheritance, this is who we are.

    Hello! This passage is a poignant reflection on heritage, resilience, and the sense of belonging to a particular place. The author vividly describes their origins, tracing their lineage back to ...

    May 1, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Scotchtown Plantation, February 1775 [3]

    Hello! This is a lengthy piece of creative writing that appears to be a part of a larger narrative. The writing style is poetic, with a lot of attention paid ...

    Apr 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Blue eyes

    Hello! This is a poem that focuses on the beauty and allure of blue eyes. The author uses descriptive language to create an image of blue eyes as bright, clear, ...

    Apr 23, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Humble Quest

    Hello! This is a beautifully written poem that uses vivid imagery to paint a picture of a desolate landscape where the remains of a dragon are slowly being reclaimed by ...

    Apr 11, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Thank You

    Hello! This piece of writing appears to be a poem or a spoken word piece that expresses gratitude in a somewhat sarcastic and ironic tone. The speaker is thanking someone ...

    Apr 9, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Flame

    Hello! This is a beautifully written poem with vivid imagery and a powerful message. The metaphor of a flame flickering in the wind is used to represent the resilience and ...

    Apr 9, 2023


"Be yourself" is not advice. It's an existential crisis waiting to happen.
— Hank Green