Hello there! This is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I am here to give you a review/comment for your lovely poem about those lovely rainy days. I am glad I got to read this because it is raining in my place and I love rainy days and remembering old memories of my childhood.
"i leave my window open when it rains,
leaving my blinds covered in dirt from the sky
i place my candle upside down to rest my chin by the window
i let the rain sprinkle on my face through the screen
the lightning hides, leaving only me and the thundering, gray heaven
sulking in the beauty of the rain pouring down on my childhood streets
the aging trees look saturated with green and water races down the curbs
my eyes fill up as the gutters do, and i wonder…
which came first?"
I love all of these lines. I actually thought at first, it's just about how you like the rain but it reminds me of my childhood too. Although, it kinda feels long so you should cut it into two or three parts. Overall, it is good. Keep on writing! Have a beautiful day/night too c: