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This is a beautifully written poem with vivid imagery and a powerful message. The metaphor of a flame flickering in the wind is used to represent the resilience and perseverance of the human spirit, which is a common theme in poetry.
The use of repetition, particularly in the phrase "the next moment," adds to the sense of continuity and resilience that the poem conveys. The line "the darkness of others causal opinion" is also particularly striking, as it suggests that the speaker is not deterred by the negative opinions of others and is determined to keep going despite any obstacles.
Overall, this poem is a powerful reminder of the importance of resilience and determination in the face of adversity. The language is simple but effective, and the message is universal and timeless. Well done.
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Points: 25
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