TheClosetKidnapper

I liked this. It had an uncommon sound to it, and is beautifully written. I especially love the paragraph about adventures, because I can relate to everything the main character ...

I just want to say that I loved this. It's beautifully written and just wonderful, in a twisted sort of way. I don't usually read horror or much of anything ...

Hi, MindBlown! This is a great piece. My favorite stanza is the third, and my favorite lines were the first two in the fourth stanza. It shows the uncertainty of ...

Hi, Creativeatheart! I'm Rocky and I'll be reviewing your story today. Content: Overall, this is a lovely piece. It's interesting and has plot, which is most of what a novel ...

Hi, BaByLa! I'm Rocky, and I'm going to review your poem today. Content: Overall, this is a great piece. I do understand how PenguinAttack would think this is about a ...

Hey, VJS! It's me again. I'm going to review what you added in here. Content: This is great. There isn't really anything I can say regarding the content, as there ...

Hi, disheartenedcat! I'm Rocky and I'm going to review your poem for you today. Like GeeLyria said, this is great. The first stanza is definitely the strongest point, and has ...

Hey, VictoriaJS! Welcome to YWS! Firstly, I'd like to ask if this is a chapter or just an excerpt for your novel? It has potential, but seems a little short ...

Hey, Toe! I just thought I'd get back into reviewing and saw that you didn't have one on this yet, so here I am. Firstly, I'd like to say that ...

PIX! Hi. I shall review this now. Content: - Great. I don't see much of a problem with this. The only thing I can say is that the second to ...

PIX! I've decided to catch up on some reviewing and saw that this chapter was lonely when it came to that, so here I am. For starters, this was great. ...

Hey there, Viper! Welcome to YWS! This is actually really good, although it sounds more like a poem to me than it does a song, but that's just me. Just ...

I agree with Shadow Princess. This was really good. It flows nicely and works well with having no defined rhyme scheme, which is really hard to do. The only thing ...

Hey, buddy! Great piece here. You only have the basics to its full potential though. As AwesomeSocks said, you've got a ton of run-on sentences and misplaced apostrophes. As I've ...

Hey, princessofmisery! Rocky here for a review. Let me start off by saying that I loved this. You have a great idea of the emotion you want to express through ...