ThatOneGuy2002

Hey, this was a cool story. I like the way you told it from a dogs point of veiw, the world around and the people in its life. I kind ...

This is good, and a good representation of the sad reality of what has become of todays society. Nowadays it is rare to find someone who cares for others more ...

This is cool. I kind of see it as an insight to this novel that will never be written. It reminds me a bit of myself (I suppose it is ...

Hey, I liked this. I like how it was simpler in word choice, but envoked some of the feelings you would find in a complex poem. It was a pretty ...

Hey, I just wanted to say, I love this work. It actually reminds me much of my own style, concentrating a bigger meaning into a complex array of words, good ...

Hey, this chapter seemed alright. I just had a few things you may consider that could improve the story. Firstly, look for off sounding sentences, such as one in the ...

Niiice, I loved it great job :D. As for the category, I think it floats somewhere near lyrical. I dont have much to correct, although perhaps the flow needed a ...

I like this, it definitely hits some key points in what many do as adults, losing the fun in everything, and at the same time losing meaning. Definitely a problem ...

This is a nice story. I like the setup, and especially the plot, an awesome storyline! Im pretty interested to see what becomes of this settlement. However, I think you ...

Hey, good work. Thats a wonderfull message to send out, especially in todays world, where ones flaws are all too often blown out of proportion by others, making someone beautiful ...

Awesome poem. I felt perhaps the description was a tiny bit different from what the poem is actually about, less about silence and more of sound and the descriptions of ...

Hey, first off, awesome poem! I love the imagery. However, I think I spotted a few areas of which improving would make it all together better. I felt that perhaps ...

Wow, thats awesome. I love the reality of this, unsure if something said really represents whats inside, totally relatable. I like the slight romance about it. I dont really have ...

Awesome, I think I can relate to this, the violent, greedy, selfish side of myself, which makes me forget reason, throw mercy down the drain. I understand what your talking ...

Hey, first off, good choice of topic. Winter is one of the best things to write on, the beauty of the ice, the chills of snow, just a topic waiting ...