Be like the lotus flower
It doesn't wait for someone to bring it out from the mud
It rises from the mud
And it blooms put of the dirt
Don't stay in the dark and drool
Come out of your shell
Show the world who you are.
You are beautiful
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Hello! I thought this was wonderful! definitely an enjoyable read!
I love the flow and rhythm of it over all. Also, I the attention to detail in the process of a lotus flower blooming. Also, I find it amazing how much of an impact you were able to make in such a short piece! Thank you for posting this work! I cant wait to read more of your work in the future!
Hey, good work. Thats a wonderfull message to send out, especially in todays world, where ones flaws are all too often blown out of proportion by others, making someone beautiful and wonderful hate themselves. Anyways, it was good. I think it would be better to replace one of the "mud"s just to make it flow better, but other than that its flow is alright. Good job, and I look foward to reading more from you :3
Hello! I’m WriterSister33.
Here to review your poem;)
I really liked this poem!!:)
I think lotus flowers are beautiful!
This poem may a little short, but its still beautiful:)
It is very poetic, and It is nice to find inspiration from:)
Hope that you are having an amazing day, and like’d my review<3
Keep up the good work!!!
Best of good writing!!
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