Tenyo

Hey Cspr! Why does this have no reviews ? :( I love the imagery in here. I don't fully understand some of it, but that makes me like it even ...

Hey there! This is pretty good! I'm not entirely sure how to review it though. The style is interesting, and I think it would be perfect for a pre-teen girl, ...

Bobby! So, I see you lengthened this chapter, but didn't buff it out :( I agree with Makenna that it's all still going waay too fast. I think first you ...

This is beautiful. I love the style of it. I know usually I'm really fussy over incomplete sentences and clause fragments and the what-not but in this the seamless style ...

Hey Tarameagan The formatting of this reminds me a lot of my earlier works. Do you write in notepad, or straight into yws? You should probably invest in a proper ...

= D I don't actually know what the name is for this genre of poetry but I love it anyway. Imagery: To start with the negetive, I don't think this ...

Hey there! Forgive me for not giving you a thorough review. I don't know if this was written like this or if yws ate the formatting, but you should always ...

Hey there Dawnpath! So, I am a big fan of fantasy and a huuuge fan of dragons. Dragons are awesome! For that I highly approve of this poem right from ...

Hey Charcoalspacewolfman. Interesting name XD Pacing: The pacing in this is great! You snagged me in from the word go and kept me rolling right through the piece. I'm afraid ...

Hey Elfin! I agree with Tommybear. Usually the issue of self harm annoys me, mainly the people who self harm just to seem like they're sad enough to self harm, ...

Hey Brokenhearted Presentation: First and formost you have to consider how you're presenting your work to those who have to read it. This has no line breaks, and huge chunks ...

O.O Nice work with the rhyming scheme = D There are some really interesting pair ups in there. It's all too easy to stick to the normal "Though-go, heart-apart, me-free," ...

Hey Izzy Imagery: I love it! The Imagery in this is creative and very well described. It makes me feel like I'm floating in another dimension and looking at everything ...

Hey Toboldlygo! I do this. I do that. I do this... I apologise for being so blunt but you really, really need to work on your sentence structure. Of your ...

Hey Day! I have two completely conflicting opinions of this. I love the idea, sooo much. I love the irony and the observation of it all. I wonder how long ...