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Re: Perspective- Chapter 4
OMG! I do not want to sound rude, but you really have improved fro your last story/chapter! Okay, so here goes... Postatives - You ahve really put alot of effort ...
Wed Jun 06, 2012 8:43 pm -
Re: A Boy
Hi , TazmaniaGirl to review here! First off, may I say this is extremely talented! I can't write a poem for DEAR LIFE! So give your self a pat on ...
Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:05 pm -
Re: Morning
Hi! I'm TazmaniaGirl, and I am going to try and Review this poem of yours! Okay, so here we go... Posatives - This is a very sweet poem, and it's ...
Wed Jun 06, 2012 2:00 pm -
Re: Perspective- Chapter 3
Cool Beans, yet another great story! Posatives : Detail is great, there is alot of it. Every line I read, it makes me feel like I'm the character, and believe ...
Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:19 pm -
Re: everything i touch, like cracks in a screen
Well Done! This is great, and you should be proud. There are a few words I do not undertstand, so I need to check a dictionary, but it's always good ...
Tue Jun 05, 2012 2:20 pm -
Re: The Puzzle
AMAZING! I don't actually know what to say about it. Mistakes, I think. It's detailed, so awsome. It's been thought about carefully, and it's been scripted well. But, yeah, there ...
Tue Jun 05, 2012 2:16 pm -
Re: Yours To Hold
I sthis a song, because it really sounds like one! I really like this, I truely do. I don't think there are negatives, so I'll start with the posatives. Detail ...
Tue Jun 05, 2012 2:13 pm -
Re: The Boy Called Atlas
This is really awsome! So much descriptive writting is in this, and I bet it took ages for this amout of detail! I love it, I truely do. I don't ...
Tue Jun 05, 2012 2:10 pm -
Re: I'm sorry daddy
So much thought has been put into this. I hope it's not true. This is certainly a great peice of work, and you've really expressed your true meaning here, sharing ...
Tue Jun 05, 2012 2:08 pm -
Re: Some short poems.
This is amazing! The amout of detail in every single poem is just to good to put into words, and (don't think) there are any grammer or spelling mistakes, so ...
Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:42 pm -
Re: Perspective- Chapter 2
This is once again, amaizing! I love whta you've done with the characters. I find it's going in a really nice flow, and the amous of deatil you put into ...
Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:36 pm -
Re: DELETED
Ok, so, I actually have nothing to write a review on. But I'll try :p Your name is very interesting, and I like that. It's very short :) There are ...
Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:48 pm -
Re: I've lost all my friends to Facebook
This poem is funny and quite touching. I love these kind of poems, so this certainly reached out to me. The detail is great, you've tried to explain this as ...
Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:45 pm -
Re: Immerse.
This is amazing. I am really sorry about your friend. She must have been a great freind, for you to write this poem. This poem is very touching, it reaches ...
Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:42 pm -
Re: Silk
Ok, so this shows a kind of story, and that's good. You ahve put alot of detail into this, and this is what people want. You ahve also made it ...
Sun Jun 03, 2012 1:38 pm
