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TazmaniaGirl

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Perspective- Chapter 4

    OMG! I do not want to sound rude, but you really have improved fro your last story/chapter! Okay, so here goes... Postatives - You ahve really put alot of effort ...

    Jun 6, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Boy

    Hi , TazmaniaGirl to review here! First off, may I say this is extremely talented! I can't write a poem for DEAR LIFE! So give your self a pat on ...

    Jun 6, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Morning

    Hi! I'm TazmaniaGirl, and I am going to try and Review this poem of yours! Okay, so here we go... Posatives - This is a very sweet poem, and it's ...

    Jun 6, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Perspective- Chapter 3

    Cool Beans, yet another great story! Posatives : Detail is great, there is alot of it. Every line I read, it makes me feel like I'm the character, and believe ...

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: everything i touch, like cracks in a screen

    Well Done! This is great, and you should be proud. There are a few words I do not undertstand, so I need to check a dictionary, but it's always good ...

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Puzzle

    AMAZING! I don't actually know what to say about it. Mistakes, I think. It's detailed, so awsome. It's been thought about carefully, and it's been scripted well. But, yeah, there ...

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Yours To Hold

    I sthis a song, because it really sounds like one! I really like this, I truely do. I don't think there are negatives, so I'll start with the posatives. Detail ...

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The Boy Called Atlas

    This is really awsome! So much descriptive writting is in this, and I bet it took ages for this amout of detail! I love it, I truely do. I don't ...

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Other » Realistic, Review Re: I'm sorry daddy

    So much thought has been put into this. I hope it's not true. This is certainly a great peice of work, and you've really expressed your true meaning here, sharing ...

    Jun 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Some short poems.

    This is amazing! The amout of detail in every single poem is just to good to put into words, and (don't think) there are any grammer or spelling mistakes, so ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Perspective- Chapter 2

    This is once again, amaizing! I love whta you've done with the characters. I find it's going in a really nice flow, and the amous of deatil you put into ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: DELETED

    Ok, so, I actually have nothing to write a review on. But I'll try :p Your name is very interesting, and I like that. It's very short :) There are ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Satire, Culture Re: I've lost all my friends to Facebook

    This poem is funny and quite touching. I love these kind of poems, so this certainly reached out to me. The detail is great, you've tried to explain this as ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Immerse.

    This is amazing. I am really sorry about your friend. She must have been a great freind, for you to write this poem. This poem is very touching, it reaches ...

    Jun 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Silk

    Ok, so this shows a kind of story, and that's good. You ahve put alot of detail into this, and this is what people want. You ahve also made it ...

    Jun 3, 2012


Poetry is a phantom script telling how rainbows are made and why they go away.
— Carl Sandburg