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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95788
For those who want to review it
Ok, so, I actually have nothing to write a review on.
But I'll try :p
Your name is very interesting, and I like that.
It's very short
There are no spelling mistakes.
Negavtives - You ahven't written anything!
I am sorry you can't write it on here, but maybe you'l find a way.
I hope in the future I can read this, and It'll be good!
Oooh, I ahve one more negative.
There was no point trying to submitt it, and bless you, it was a waste of points
Yeah, reading the below comment that conclusion you have drawn is clearly not the case. Whatever format I used (either distorted by changes in the site or faulted in my mistakes) has messed up, so I had to delete it. I could have kept it on here, but there would be no paragraphs and all punctuation was replaced with '???'. As to why, I am stumped.
Sorry Guys, the site's not letting me paragraph it or get rid of those irritating '???'.
Sorry for this, but I'm going to have to delete and repost.
Seperate this into paragraphs and I'll read it