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This is such a beautiful love poem. It's so sweet and romantic, and I'm sure those of us writers on here would appreciate reading this. They would call that true happiness. This is the picture perfect moment couples dream of, and perhaps have seen. Like I said, this is beautiful, short and sweet, and straight to the point. Isn't that how love should be?
Keep writing. This is amazing.
Thank you so much ! This is my first poem in a long time, I'm glad you liked it.
Hello very well done very sweet and romantic poem filled with love that would be a lovely poem for a girlfriend or boyfriend or even a partner just for them to hear you say that it was very well written i enjoyed reading it very much keep up the good work very talented indeed
xoxoxo
Thank you very much ! I actually did write it for someone.
Hi!
I'm TazmaniaGirl, and I am going to try and Review this poem of yours!
Okay, so here we go...
Posatives -
This is a very sweet poem, and it's also very romantic.
It's almost like a short (very short) story that I can play in my head, and I can see what's going on.
This is also very descriptive, and very detailed, so it gives you more information, on what is going on.
Neagtives -
The lack of punctuation.
This doesn't really give much meaning, if you don't have the correct punctuation.
Things like full stops, exclaimation marks, question marks ect.
Imagine this -
Come down to our supereb restraunt today, and get free COLA!
It's more interseting than -
Come to our restraunt today and get free cola
Can you tell the difference?
I don't think there are any spelling mistakes, but
OVERALL -
Well Done, and keep writing!!!
~ TazmaniaGirl (BAD REVIEWER)!
Thank you so much for the constructive criticism ! I wasn't sure how to include the punctuation last night, I'll go fix that now.