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Re: Dance with Death
Hi, TazmaniaGirl to review here! Lets begin, okay? I think this is a great Poem. The title is a great name, and it definately wiggels it's way into the Poem. ...
Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:02 pm -
Re: Above it All
Hey there, TazmaniaGirl to review! I review things differently to others. Okay, so... Positives - Great describing words! I loved the way you put ' Imblued' in there. It's a ...
Sat Aug 04, 2012 12:56 pm -
Re: Silence
Hi! I'm TazmaniaGirl. This is great, by the way. I love the kind of flow, like, how it' been produced. I like the metephors. " Were frozen in this world". ...
Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:48 pm -
Re: 2/11/12
Hi, I'm TazmaniaGirl, and I would like to review! I review differently from other people because I'm not quite sure how to review. First off, I love the thought that ...
Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:46 pm -
Re: Clash - Chapter 1.
Hi! TazmaniaGirl to review here! I'm not really good at Reviewing. I do it a different way to others. I state the obvious and that, but I don't do it ...
Tue Jun 26, 2012 5:29 pm -
Re: Depressed
Hi, TazmaniaGirl to review here! This is pretty hort, and hard to review, but I'll try, okay? I like how you've set this out, it's neat, and clear. I like ...
Sun Jun 24, 2012 4:56 pm -
Re: Ace Crawford: New York's Finest
Hi, TazmaniaGirl to review here! ( I forgot to click review, so I'm going to repeat this, okay?) Posatives - May I say, this is a great read so far. ...
Sun Jun 24, 2012 4:52 pm -
Re: Joke's on Me
Hi, TazmaniaGirl to review here! Let me just say, this is an amazing poem, and I'm guessing you put alot of hard work into this! A pat on the back! ...
Sun Jun 24, 2012 4:45 pm -
Re: Untitled? (Chapter 2)
Hi, TazmaniaGirl to review here...again! I loved this again, it that amazing flow that you had last time. I have a few more neagtives then last time, but I'm sure ...
Sun Jun 24, 2012 8:53 am -
Re: Untitled? (Chapter 1)
Hi, TazmaniaGirl to review here! Ths is a great piece of writing, I couldn't stop reading it! I was drawn in by the first sentance, and that is what you ...
Sun Jun 24, 2012 8:43 am -
Re: It's nobody.
I live the way you've written this! It's got a great flow to it, and there's obviastly been alot of hard work put into this. I like the punctuation, as ...
Sun Jun 24, 2012 8:36 am -
Re: Merp
.... I actually don't know what to say. And I always have something to say. I don't know wheter this is a good thing, or bad. Rude words, and spelling ...
Sat Jun 23, 2012 6:54 pm -
Re: Guest of Honor
Hi, TazmaniaGirl to review here! Okay, so lets begin... Posatives - May I say, this is exellent! You've really put your best effort into this, and it has shone through ...
Thu Jun 07, 2012 9:20 am -
Re: Back of Your Hand (Hurricane)
Hi there, TazmaniaGirl to review! Okay, so, lets begin... Posatives - It's short and snappy, and your getting the message through clearly. It's a sweet poem, and that always attracts ...
Thu Jun 07, 2012 9:18 am -
Re: Through the End
Hi there! TazmaniaGirl to review here! Okay, so, here goes... Posatives - I love this poem, I truely do, it's got a great flow to it, and that's what every ...
Thu Jun 07, 2012 9:11 am
