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Nice, once of the better love poems I've read for a while.
I like the enjambment, really gives an nice rhythm and flow, the poem really just slides of the tongue. The content it's self was great although it gets a little cheesy at the end but it's no big deal.
A great poem. Sorry for the short review.
First of all I just have to say that this is an awesome poem. It is beautifully written and is quite easy to read. I especially like the repitition at the beginning as it just stood out for me. I couldn't find any problems at all with it so that's good. Overall, I enjoyed your poem quite a bit.
Hi there, TazmaniaGirl to review!
Okay, so, lets begin...
Posatives -
It's short and snappy, and your getting the message through clearly.
It's a sweet poem, and that always attracts the rihgt kind of crowd.
There has been alot of effort put into this, and it's clearly showed.
ITS AMAZING!
Negative's -
I don't think there are any, so that's great to see!
OVERALL -
BRILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep Writing!
~ TazmaniaGirl xx