Tay01

Well, it is a bit short, but one of the worst moments to say "it's bad and horrible" is now. I can see you took time to think about it ...

This is quite a realistic poem relating to the truth. However, there are a few things just a little off. You have been quite good with the rhyming and the ...

How did you even do this. I am sure there were a lot of back-spaces as you were typing. Keep deleting each word to re-type it in a weird form. ...

We meet again Sunset101. Hello! I kind of want to break my device. What about: "I kind of want to break my device" It puts the suspense first and ends ...

Alright, alright. I must be missing something here. The title does not really match the description. Nor did the description really match the story. If it did, then there is ...

Just a quick one. At first, I thought the poem was that big picture up there. Of course, it wasn't. But at least put the poem up there first. I ...

Hello Nightcrawler, Tay01 here to review your work. I've basically read it all, but it doesn't follow the rhythm. soft, splashing notes quiver along ivory keys, pause, then reeling out ...

This is truly a really good poetry. I really admire the creativity and the idea that you got. However, there are a few by a few I mean MANY slips ...

Hello undertheshadow, Tay01 here to review your short piece of writing. To be here reviewing when nobody else had, it's just, amazing. It's ridiculous. Anyway, let's not waste any time ...

This poetry of yours is very sad and true, it can even bring tears to my eyes, which is what is happening right now. I like how you enhanced your ...

This was a pretty long poem, but cool. Make sure that the rhythm of the poem does not run away, especially this part. It is totally out of place forthe ...

Wow, this could be much better with stanzas. Use (Shift + Return/Enter) to separate stanzas. The rest are pretty much fine. Now I only focus on this particular line. I'll ...

This is literally nothing but a poem. It is sort of a short story but it's more of a poem thing. I really liked it. There is only one problem. ...

Hello theironnovelist, Tay01 here to review your little poetry. It has a strong little meaning. I have not been on YWS for like three weeks or so, and I really ...

Wow, this is really cool. If you keep on writing like this, I believe that you will be a great poet as you move on and along. Overall, this is ...