Young Writers Society

Hello, E.E for a possibly quick review and maybe some utter nonsense! Grim is here as well, drinking hot cocoa and being a slacker. *Grim looks over, glaring* So, lets get started.

I love it. I love the writing. I have not seen this style before and the fact that the you just don't beat around the bush and ask us if we like your writing. Your style. At first I was like umm, okay. But the more I read over it the more I began to really like it. I did not notice any grammar mistakes so this is just a really quick review to be honest.

Now is when I dissect your poem and see if I can't get its meaning right! So, you are telling us how amazing it is that we have this language, this way to amazing with lines and shapes and sounds. You are telling us that there are some rules but we can still push against societies rules with the fact that we have our own form of fighting back. Not physical fighting though. Even when the letters are not put together right we can still read just like if the words were spelled right or not. And that is amazing

Otherwise, I liked the poem and keep up the good work! Happy Halloween! I need to go now, Grim has some more dead to reap and I ran out of cocoa for him.

aHHHHHHHHHHHH MY OCD

**dies from OCD overdose**

Yup I unersand yur hendwitn jst lke i du naw. I love the way you write this it is so unique and stylist. I love the way you write your words mispelled and it is cool, if your story so interesting no one care about the mispelled word an punctuation. So keep on doing it, it is your thing no one can take it away from you.

Wow! Not gonna lie, I kind of expected this to be a little...I don't know, maybe...unemotional, and kind of childish, in the sense that the misspelled words would make it difficult to read and not really make sense. However, I was dead wrong. This was really deep if you take the time to understand it! I think it really shows how much you love what you do, and I think you should definitely keep doing it.

I liked that you were at least consistent with your spelling (lack thereof XD). It was definitely worth the extra effort to get to the end. It was a different take on our language, written and spoken for that matter. It really put it in perspective how intellectually advanced humans must be to be able to effortlessly write and speak fluently. This piece makes you think about where society would be if we couldn't do this. That would suck.

Anyway, great job with this one, keep writing! Caterpickle signing off!

How did you even do this. I am sure there were a lot of back-spaces as you were typing. Keep deleting each word to re-type it in a weird form. Pretty interesting. Of course, I had difficulties. But I just cannot read these few parts. At least make it a bit easier to read although there are spelling mistakes made on purpose.

Rlues ditctanig how each smyobl suonds.

Olny hmanus do this.

Aftreall, by the ditcionraies rlues, hlaf of waht I’m wrtiing isn’t eevn enlgish and yet yuo’re stlil here raeding it.

*changed*

Afterall, by the dictionaries rules, half of what I'm writing isn't even english and yet you're still here reading it.

I found that I too, could read this perfectly, it's so beautifully unique and rebellious to the typical way of doing things, I can tell that you are a kindred spirit. It is well put, funny, meaningful, and ultimately, in the end, even with flaws, it's a beauatiful thnig.

O.0
I clicked on this with the intention of telling you you mispelled beauty. Um, this wasn't what I expected... Lol

Love itttt

Wow, just wow.

What got my attention was the title. It drove me nuts, but I had a feeling it was supposed to be typed like that. I thought that: "Maybe it was just for the title and the writing in the piece was normal." Nah, I was dead wrong!

I found it so strange that I could so easily read that without any difficulty, despite the fact that the whole thing had spelling mistakes and typos!

Very interesting way of presenting a writing piece, ChocolateCello, very creative, interesting and quite fun to read!

Continue to write, my friend, even when it involves purposeful errors!


MissLyricz x

I really enjoyed this poem, and I think I understand what your getting at. It's interesting that human beings have come up with a way to communicate and think of certain things when your just reading little symbols on a page or a screen. It's a beautiful thing. Without writing I think the world would be far more dull, it would be absolutely boring. If I couldn't read poetry and novels, and write my own what would I be able to do? There would be no text based video games, there would be no way to write down my thoughts, there would be no fun. Sure, there are flaws in writing, there are rules and restrictions but even with these flaws your definitely right. Writing is a beautiful thing.

- SinisterPotatoe -

Oh God, I died reading this. At first I didn't notice that you wasn't spelled write and I kept reading and reading it like it was written. It sounds like a different language, Harry Potter type stuff, or Star Wars aliens. You've got a nice point there my friend, but hey, we need some type of organization to stay sane. Still, gerat pacei.
Viv, out.

This is so meaningful. I loved your poem, such a creative and great idea. Even with all of the spelling errors, I was able to read it. I really liked you poem, it was, very.... Creative....

I hope you keep up the great writing,
Love,
Dogsrule5

P.S. I hope you write more poems like this one!

This is so meaningful, and it surprised me how easy I could read it with so many spelling errors. Such a creative idea.

Wow. My eyes.

This piece speaks to me in deeper personal level. ;-;

This is beautiful. Definitely wish it was longer. I guess this thirsting for more clearly articulates what a wonderful piece of work this is. Good job!

I'm glad some of you guys appreciate this because it was PAINFUL to write with this many errors

Ahh, beautiful one, Cello! I got the feels, even with my grammar-Nazi OCD.

With such a short piece, I keep wanting more, despite all the spelling errors you purposefully made. I think the only thing you could really do to help this piece is to make it longer. I feel that though it's short, it conveys the message clearly, but it leaves readers lamenting for more to read. Maybe you could expand on it? Perhaps try to explain why only humans do it, or why we are so desperate to make noise in the silence? Just a suggestion. Honestly, leaving it how it is wouldn't change my wonderful opinion on this piece.

I love how you explain why communication is so important to us. I never would have thought to say that we are "depsertae to mkae niose eevn in the slinece" or, in correct terms, "desperate to make noise even in the silence." I thought that this line was a very creative way to describe our need for communication, words, sounds, and symbols.

All in all, I really, really enjoyed everything about this work (even the spelling errors)! Keep up the fantastic writing as you always do, Cello!
~Em101cats~

Watch somebody make a review about all the spelling and grammar mistakes. Love the message, even if I want to correct everything.

Well, I agree! XD