Tammi

"I know that life can hurt But death can wait. Never forget it." I am surely going to write this down on the walls of my room. Beautiful lines. I ...

Wow! i have no clue where do such brilliant idea strike peoples brains! Wonderful! If this was something you did unwillingly then trust me mate you are going to write ...

Hey! Great idea, greater effort on rhyme scheme and greatest penning. I really need to appreciate you for this! But, there are several areas which possess visible errors. So i ...

Hey there! Mysterious, well written, fascinating, well thought and good poem. I assume that it is about two best friends. Because that's what besties do! We are perfect for each ...

re-read this poem thrice.. Hullo! What an opening! Metaphors are brilliant. And their use here is meticulous. Now, before i run out of adjectives to describe each and every sentence ...

Hello! So, cool poem..i would say! The intelligent play of words enchants the reader! keep it up! Besides, the whole poem is ironical. Because if wrath is not patient it ...

Hello! first poem i saw today, and its just awesome mate! Just awesome! i have no criticism regarding your poem. Just i was unable to understand the part "rusted knife ...

Hello! (its me! i was wondering after all this time...) ;) Beautiful, fantastic, optimistic, cute, romantic poem.I like it and i rate i 4/5. Now, i don't want you to ...

Hello! I am in a dilemma, it think i am too dumb to understand this poem or maybe you are such a random crazy poet that this poem sounds so ...

Hey! I don't think i an give you a long review but surely give you a few suggestions to improve your poem. Currently its "okay" but i believe that with ...

Hello! What a poem?!dude! Hats off..you already have seemed to acquired the level of poetry as Shakespeare and Wordsworth and Frost! Still i would like to give you a review ...

Hello! I can't say much about your poem. So to describe how i felt i rate it.And i rate it 2.5/5. i am sorry if this made you feel bad. ...

Hello! As a poem it is very good. As a reader i read it thrice in row, so that explains it! Now, is this poem about prostitutes.For girls who have ...

Hello! I like this poem simply because it's about positivity. I can't say much except i have got some quick suggestions and if you reconsider them to me your poem ...

Hey! I personally love such poems that is about kids and mothers and family and friendship over all those "relationship breakups" poems. You have actually tried a good idea. I ...