Hello !

Hello TZH! I received a very fine review from you so thought why not return the favor?

So, first of all, the poem is different! No, the concept isn't anything much newer, the approach is. I like the way you've written it saying like, somebody is your favorite "Hello!" I liked that thing. Also, the use of symbolic words. ^^

Now, I'd like pointing some errors out. One thing though I'm having little difficulty in understanding is-your tense choices. You've switched your tenses randomly. Well, we'll get there, I'll try my best to make my point clear. The other thing that is bugging me is the lack of stanzas. Because, I feel a very intense need of stanzas here, so, if you feel like editing it (There's always room for improvement, y'know? ) please consider, do consider making stanzas. Now, to make stanzas, you can just press the "Space" button. Often it doesn't seem to work. In that case, separating stanzas with " - " or " . " seems alright too. Better something than nothing, yes? Oh and AGAIN, you needed few punctuation there. I see you've hardly used any! And, the capitalization matters too. It's almost a poetic choice but still.. you know.. >_<

Anyway, I intend to go line by line so, first see here,

You are my favorite hello!
As a day without you is a
Day without life
You helped me found myself
And becoming better

We had our share of fights
In this relationship
But we have trust and faith
When hurt sometimes tears rolled down
But you wipe them out with your
Sweet smile and genuine laughter

Sometimes I had weird, stupid, unnecessary arguments
But you have patience
And our communication never stops
Sometimes I feel jealous
But you make me realize in your own special way
That how much you really care

You gave me a perfect motto of life
That sometimes some things are better late than never
But sometimes some things are worth never then late
I always want to thank you
For everything you did and do
And I know I’ll do
I always apologize to you for
Everything I did wrong knowing or unknowing
And I always pray that
You and only you remain
My favorite HELLO always!

Hey THZ!
This was really sweet. It had a certain cuteness and that's what I liked most about it. But I guess there is always a scope of improvement right? I've got a few suggestions and nitpicks for your work.
1)"You helped me found myself
And becoming better " here instead of "found" you could use "in finding" that would be better fir the flow.
2)"we had our share of fights
In this relationship
But we have trust and faith" here "I" and "b" should be small and there should be a "," after relationship.
3)"Sometimes I had weird, stupid, unnecessary arguments" "we" would sound better instead of "I" and you should probably split the line.
4)"that you and only you remain
My favorite HELLO always" I guess you should change it to
"that you and you always remain
My favourite HELLO"
6) there are also some unwanted capitalization
Overall I really liked your poem.

Keep on writing,
Fangirl~

Hello! (its me! i was wondering after all this time...)

Beautiful, fantastic, optimistic, cute, romantic poem.I like it and i rate i 4/5.
Now, i don't want you to think much about the whole content but you can surely go through these areas-
1) Grammar needs to be looked upon in the 4th and 5th line besides that punctuation here and there needs a lot of attention.
2)"But sometimes some things are worth never then late". this line is very good. But please consider re-framing it. For now i don't get it so can't help you with re-framing.

Overall, i loved this poem. In fact the whole idea of "Hello!" and the way you have used it is wonderful..
i am not mentioning the good things simply because everything in your poem is too good.
just try working on these areas and i will be waiting for your autograph..
best of regards..