TakeThatYouFiend

This is the sort of thing I would expect in a Dr. Who story. Yet again another excellent work, with layers of detail and progression through the story. Yet again ...

This is good, and I am very surprised you could squeeze so much writing material out of a plank and two bits of old rope. It is almost as if ...

Take that you fiend with a reviewlet; Certificate of immaturness offically awarded. Is this a good thing? However, as a seasoned fantasy reader/writer/tinker/tailor/soldier/spy I can honestly say this

AHAA! Take that you fiend to review. It seems that this is under reviewed, because everyone is too scared of long stories, because they are lazy. Their is a great ...

I like it! Is this perhaps slightly self-biographical. O rperhaps you were looking for a way to start the first sentence. But one thing's for certain, you've posted it in ...

Take that you fiend! to review, This is a realy nice work, interposed beutifully with one of my favroute* shakespeare sonnets! I do feel you have missed out on punctuation, ...

O.K. When I saw the title this is definitely not what I expected. It has a sort of childishness (I like words my spell check doesn't know), which is reflected ...

If the truth is mearly interlocking lies, are lies different versions of the truth? It seems to me to be incomplete, but I am not sure. Is this the first ...

I like the poem for its structure, timing and pace, but in my eyes it has a couple of faults. The subject is universal and probably the most written about ...

This poem's main strength is in the fact that many of it's readers may have had similar experiences in the past, the admiration of a butterfly's beautiful swirling patterns, and ...

13 chapters? Nice touch. I liked this short story from the start, and I simply cannot fault it. You have great phrasing, the chapter divisionswwere perfect, and the characterization is ...

Overall a good poem, a nice-ish theme, and good prose. I'm no spelling bee, but you forgot to capitalize the I. I wouldn't mention it but it puts me of ...

I definitely see what you mean by calling it graphic. It is a weird poem, and I was a little taken aback at first, but it is good. It seems ...

This is a good book. Your main strength is the plot line, you have developed your idea and got everything to work. You have some good description and characters. But ...

Yes! This is definitely the best of the three, it ticks all the boxes. Beautiful description, a twisting turning kaleidoscope of thoughts, truth, and metaphors. It is certainly not a ...