TakeThatYouFiend

I started reading this with nerves of steel to face the random onslaught that is Pompa-poetry (tm), and I am surprisingly surprised to see a surprisingly heart-stirring poem. The classic ...

Huzzah! A nice slightly random poem! I have a couple of small criticisms, but nothing to important. Firstly, I do not understand the line "Marring the sky like a pocket ...

Heloooo! (Thinks to self: not another avatar. :-) ) I have mentioned before my difficulty in reviewing short meaningful poems, so excuse the bumbling. First off, allow me to compliment ...

The first two poems were about nature, but I think the last two should be recatagorized in your portfolio a "Strange things"! Let me assume that the lack of punctuation ...

This is one hundred percent STRANGE! and I like it... the line: "The world has slain, my poetic feet. That walk my Confidence. From street to street." The nfirst two ...

HUzzah! Lucky you is getting mr. review (A.K.A. me) going through your nature poems! This is VERY well done, and if I wasn't already following you I would do on ...

Huzzah! You have written a poem without death, fear, or deppresion! The line breaks are perfect, and, in conjunction with the punctuation they make the poem flow through the reader' ...

"This is not bragging". Much. :-) I totally agree with this poem, that, with time and effort, most things are achievable. You don't need to be a singer to sing ...

What a depressing poem! This genuinely made me sad-such an innocent viewpoint, made clear by the "daddy" over "dad" (I still call my dad daddy, but that is despite the ...

Hello! This a very nice poem, and leaves me thinking what situation would you play the piano immediately before death? This left me thinking. .. The words are perfect, and ...

This is a lovely poem, despite the depressing subject matter. (Honest to God I hope this isn't a true experience), because you have plenty of originality. The best thing about ...

This is a lovely poem, but I am probably missing a deep philosophical meaning-I tend to do that :-) The line "a cloud, an eye, a soul." was a little ...

It is such a pity this has so little reviews! (by the way you avatar is still awesome!) -I really liked this, and the rhythe, pacing and rhyming are all ...

This is a nice poem, and I liked the little double meanings throughout the piece. -You have already said you need an ending, so I won't go into this, but ...

This is a lovely poem, with a great sense of travel, which I belive is the imagery you are trying to convey. -I think the rhythm and flow of this ...