SushiSashimi333

Heyo! Sushi here. Okay, first off I would like to say your style of which you have written this was great! You really have a voice in this and that ...

Heyo! Got the invite and thought I should give you more notifications! First off I must say I think you developed the main character pretty well for just the first ...

Heyo! Sushi here to review this piece. First I would like to say that I like the fact that despite you mainly writing poetry and lyrics, you wrote a narrative. ...

Sushi here! Okay, let me say that your opening line was very nice. It immediately caught my attention and made me want to read more. The little line about the ...

Sushi here finally. Sorry it took so long. Why are you still after memeeeeee?” I have a feeling that this may be the effects of the water, but at first ...

Sushi here! Sorry it took me so long with my club and all, but I have arrived :D Beginning: First off I must say that your title is catchy and ...

Review time with Sushi! Okay, so overall this had a nice feel to it, in the sense that it gave a melancholy and depressing mood. The way this was written ...

Hey, poetry normally isn't my thing, so my review might not mean that much to you. It seemed that you were rhyming every two of your lines together until the ...

Heya! Sushi here reviewing for a ink drinker XD. Cons: Well I figure that I should get all the bad stuff over with first then lighten your heart with awesome ...

Sushi here as requested, it took some time finding it but I finally got here. Good stuff: I loved the last lines that you wrote because it really painted an ...

Sushi here hoping to give you some helpful feedback! Plot: Okay, so the idea of your story is nice and I can tell there are great things ahead for it. ...

Hey rishabh! Here to review like you asked me to. Okay, so to make this easy and to the point I shall not use quotes here. Grammar: There were quite ...

Heyo! Sushi here as she said she would be. This is a pretty relaxed scene, it was nicely described and easy to imagine due to your description. There are slight ...

Sushi here as requested. First might I say that this is a really long piece, so I apologize before hand if my reviews aren't as in depth as they could ...

Sushi here and totally roaring to find out how this goes! (little note, links to the other chapters are located at the right side of the page, thought you might ...