Sujana

A notable little memory, an enjoyable read. Before I go too deeply into matters, I ask you to take a little bit of attention to the somewhat innocuous personal annoyances ...

YO JERK. IMMA DACTYL YOU ONE OF THESE DAYS. but firstly, A Review for Bloody Knocks: I will be honest with you, but I don't fully understand this metaphor. I'm ...

Just One Minor Annoyance That You Can Very Easily Ignore: -"Like… dusked dawns, prospered pawns," the ellipsis bothered me a bit. Is the narrator wavering? Is he thinking it over? ...

Some things I felt like they could definitely use work: -"Metal melt, pain felt," Metal melt? Why metal melt? I mean, I understand pain felt, but I'm a little iffy ...

Some Things That I Found That You May Or May Not Find Notable: -"Anger fumes in me life a beast," Life? I think you meant 'like a beast' here. -"And ...

Some mistakes: -"In the midst of chaos, Dean is stood, unobserved." Dean is stood? I feel like that should be Dean stood. -"Not loosing his brother, nor loosing himself- nothing." ...

I can't say that this is a short story, and neither can I say that this is a poem. I will judge it like I might judge a short story, ...

An intriguing story with an intriguing execution. Before I get to interpretations, the grammars and the like. -"“Hurry up and pick one out, Matthew” Mother said to her son. “You ...

Some things in the grammar department: -"“Who much is that thing?” Who? I think you meant 'How'. -"clocks, Old worn-out cupboards and chairs filled up almost half the store." You ...

This was a touching little story. I sort of wish it was longer, because it had a good premise overall, with different opinions surrounding one object that's given sentimental value ...

This was an interesting collection of poems. It detailed some fandoms I am a part of, others I'm not, yet it still portrayed them well enough. I feel like these ...

Normally review day leaves three things that people won't touch: novel chapters that exceed the fourth or fifth numbers, really bad works, and perfect works. This is one of the ...

Since this is very personal in its nature, I'll try to be thoughtful in this review. First off, let me start that I liked this. I really did. It wasn't ...

I found that, while this was touching in its own way, it had very questionable parts. I'll be honest--works like these are hard for me to read considering I was ...

This is probably going to be a short review, considering it's also a very short chapter. Since you have no notable grammar mistake, I felt that the only thing I ...