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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: ................

    heya chips! Time for a review! First off, I really like how you don't put breaks in your sentences, it really improves the flow of the poem. I love how ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Sea Goddess

    Hello! 15253 here for a review! First off, compliments! Because this is pretty much how i start every review! Ok so, I love how you describe the sea in the ...

    Sep 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God-Chapter 6

    Oh heyyy I remember you! Nice story! Anyway, on to the review! Compliments. It's like getting candy for breakfast! Anywho, first off! You have amazing vocabulary! I actually ha to ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: This is War; Chapter two

    OK well (Scratches his head) I guess I shoulda read the first chapter ._. anyway onto the review. Compiments. (They taste like bacon). So first off, I really like how ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 12 Part 3

    :O I'm the first one to review this? RARE! Anywho, I'm kinda confused (Probably cause i didn't read the other few chapters xD) But first, lets get to the review. ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Ineffable

    I am guessing you are older than me. Anywho, (remember me?) onto the review! Compliments! I really like you're word choice! I don't even know what diaphenous means! I also ...

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Man Unmoving.

    Dude, I;m pretty sure the story I was thinking of as I went to get more points by reviewing could probably be entered in this garden of grotesque things you're ...

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: and i am one of them

    *Poof* It's me! Yes me not 15253 (schizophrenia much) Anywho onto review (that rhymes!!!) First off...compliments! I really like how you transition to the last thing you said in the ...

    Mar 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A Bargain in the Dark

    *Poof* sound effects huh? I agree, they're great, anywho lets get on with this....(looking for witty thing to say)...review (sigh, didn't find any) First off.....(think if the dots as a ...

    Mar 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Humor Re: Nuzlocke: Pearls of Wisdom

    Mhmmm. I see. Well first i should introduce myself. My name is (Insert my name here) an i'm here to review you...scary? Story. First off....Compliments! Don't you just love em. ...

    Mar 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Ice Queen

    *Pop* Hey Lucrezia. I'm here to give you a wee review about your little piece about that movie called a synonym for...whats a synonym for frozen? Oh whatever. On to ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A fire's dance.

    *Poof* Special effects are great am i right? Anyway onto re-*Pop*..............................*Poof* Sorry. Internet died along with my shenanigans. Onto the review! First.....compliments! (Aren't yo

    Feb 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: Cold.

    Hiya whowhatwherewhenwhy. (Creative? Nope!) This is a person who is apparently not creative here to review a story called Cold (Cold? Is this because Frozen is already restricted by Disney?) ...

    Feb 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Beneath the Surface

    ....I..I see. Well this might dampen my otherwise energetic reviewing style but i will try to be as happy as i can. Sob. First off compliments. I really like how ...

    Feb 17, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: A Mother's Love

    Sob...sniffle. Hello there Bhayden this is an anonymous being of numerical value here to give his opinion on your little tearjerker. First off i would like to give a couple ...

    Feb 15, 2014


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